Reviews for The Shortest Distance from A to B
zaniarein247 chapter 1 . 2/28
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Guest chapter 11 . 2/6/2024
I’m surprised kanji rank with souji did not go down with that fight
Guest chapter 11 . 2/6/2024
Plot twist naoto is dead because souji waited to long.

I wish kanji brought up how bad it is in the fog with your own shadow since Souji never did so he never felt how hell they went through….
karoruru chapter 1 . 11/18/2023
I'm rereading this for the umpteenth time, 10 years later, and I just want to say, thank you for writing this. While this may go unfinished, it is still one of the best pieces of work I have ever read and it will continue to be that for the rest of my life. I hope life is treating you well, and honestly I'd love to see updates on even just any new social media you have, because I'd love to keep up with your work (if you're still writing!)
Bees chapter 45 . 2/8/2023
Loved it, sad about what seems to be the abandonment of the work. am new to the site so I don't know if there is a way to check for a reason or statement so if anyone knows anything that would be nice . Also jesus christ the length of this entire thing.
orclev chapter 45 . 7/7/2021
Please don't stop there! I really hope you finish this storyI love it so much!
Elsem chapter 45 . 8/11/2020
Ack! I need more! D:

This story is amazing!
Lapseinjudgment chapter 45 . 6/19/2020
I have no idea if you'll get this message, given how long it took me to find this story, but on the off chance you do I want to say this.

Thank you for writing it- I've been reading nonstop for at least the last three days and I am completely and totally in love with your story. Naoto and Kanji's characters are spot on, and I really appreciated how you portrayed their struggles with their own identities. The fact they both decided they were somewhere in between was a conclusion I particularly loved, and I look forward to rereading this once I've completed the game myself.
Guest chapter 45 . 6/9/2020
Oh man, I ain't even mad. This fic is amazing, exactly what I was looking for! Thank you, it's been a light in dark places this year.
Guest chapter 45 . 4/11/2020
I'm begging you. Zero damage, wherever you are please come back and finish this fic. This incredible story only to be left on a cliffhanger near its climax feels like an incomplete piece of history. I know you probably won't see this. But for what it's worth, this fic is extremely special to me
Guest chapter 45 . 9/16/2019
this is a true story. A girl died in 1933. A man buried her when she was still alive. The murder chanted, "Toma Sota balcu," as he buried her. Now that you have read this chant, you will meet this little girl. In the middle of the night she will be on your ceiling. She will suffocate you like she was suffocated. If you post this on your profile, she will not bother you. Your kindness will be rewarded and your worst enemy will suffocate
Guest chapter 45 . 7/14/2019
i'm incredibly late to the party but i'm so glad for this fic! great writing and wonderful characterization of our dear cast!
Otani4Risa chapter 1 . 3/22/2019
I literally downloaded this fic as a .mobi file and read in my kindle faster than I expected. That's how I noticed that it is as long as Anna Karenina lol

This was the first fanfic that I read (I'm into anime for 10 years now and for the first time I felt the urge of seing a couple happening), and I'm really thankful for your writing being this good! Thank you so much!
IZINA015 chapter 45 . 2/15/2019
God. Fucking. Dammit...

This was probly one of the best fanfics I've ever read and THE BEST Kanji/Naoto fic made. Tis a pitty that such an amazing piece of work lies abbandoned when it's sooo close to the finish line. R.I.P.
Here's to hoping that one day it will come back and be finished with style and grace. Cheers my friend!

P.S. I've found out about this fic from some author on ArchiveOfOurOwn who said he was inspired by your work. The fact that you were able to inspire someone else to create their own works is both beautiful and saddening, since your Magnum Opus will probably be never finished. But still... Thanks for the ride
Miss L chapter 45 . 11/9/2018
I really liked this fic. The way you wrote the relationship between Naoto and Kanji as bumpy with both needing to weed their issueseven after becoming together, without portraying love as the solve-it-all for their particularly messed psyches strikes me as quite realistic and endearing.
Pity that this fic has been left abandoned witout a resolution for so long. If someday you decide to come back and finish it (or at least tell us what was your planned conclusion), we ill be waiting.
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