Reviews for The Shortest Distance from A to B |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for writing this story. It's so amazing. |
![]() ![]() You made me screech like a little girl dude, bravo. |
![]() ![]() You made me hate Yosuke even more lmao fuck that guy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't care if this story hadn't been updated for almost 3 years. This is truly a one-of-a-kind piece of work, and it's everything that I could have hoped to see between Naoto and Kanji. Whatever has been going on in the author's life outside of this story, I hope and pray that someday you'll pick up a pen again (or keyboard for that matter) and see this through to the end. Unless, however, that was how it was intended. But either way, it's been a heck of a ride, even after reading this a second time. Hope everything is well, and I'll be waiting for that final conclusion. |
![]() ![]() Congratulations. This is the first time I've hated everyone besides the main pairings in a fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is some absolutely fabulous fanfiction you have going here. Naoto is a jerk, Kanji can barely string two words together, and Rise is a compulsive meddler, but I love it. And good job not taking the easy path and drawing a direct line from Kanji's thing with Naoto and Kanji's maybe-gayness. These kids are wonderfully confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's the ending? Probably got tired of writing; it happens. Life, you know? Well its been really great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haven't read whole chapter yet. Just LOL'd at your opening statement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems like you should've been a script writer for P4. Dojima actually saw them leave through a TV! Oh snap (insert other 4-letter S word)! And it seems like Kanji is just a little closer to confessing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks like Naoto is slowly getting used to the team. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In superhero origin movies, its typical to view how they gained the superpowers; I think this is the first time I read about someone complaining about it LOL. Light and Dark is useful in the actual game, but I adjusted Izanagi to use those before Naoto even joined. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too engrossed in the story to review every chapter. Its really great how you put every day in detail by expanding what the team did in the game/anime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was recommended so I thought I'd give it a shot. I like it so far and onto the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() I can't. I just can't read the next chapter. I know it would be a cliffhanger. D: I'll just pretend that the story ended at this chapter. Love the story BTW. A lot of thought was put into it. It's nice to bring more life to these characters, especially Souji. POV feels spot-on. Could really empathize a lot on Kanji. And there are times you can't just help but give a big guy hug. BRAVO! Interludes are great too. It gives a breather from Kanji's frustrations and understand Naoto's side. I wish you weren't swallowed by the shadows. I kind of breaks my heart that the story is so close to conclusion that it abruptly stopped. Still, it's one hell of a roller coaster ride. Thanks. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() :( I'm so sad this isn't finished...but I'm still going to follow and favorite anyways. It's too good. |