Thank you for writing this story. It's so amazing.

You made me screech like a little girl dude, bravo.

You made me hate Yosuke even more lmao fuck that guy

I don't care if this story hadn't been updated for almost 3 years.
This is truly a one-of-a-kind piece of work, and it's everything that I could have hoped to see between Naoto and Kanji. Whatever has been going on in the author's life outside of this story, I hope and pray that someday you'll pick up a pen again (or keyboard for that matter) and see this through to the end.
Unless, however, that was how it was intended.
But either way, it's been a heck of a ride, even after reading this a second time. Hope everything is well, and I'll be waiting for that final conclusion.

Congratulations. This is the first time I've hated everyone besides the main pairings in a fic.

This is some absolutely fabulous fanfiction you have going here. Naoto is a jerk, Kanji can barely string two words together, and Rise is a compulsive meddler, but I love it.

And good job not taking the easy path and drawing a direct line from Kanji's thing with Naoto and Kanji's maybe-gayness. These kids are wonderfully confused.

That's the ending? Probably got tired of writing; it happens. Life, you know? Well its been really great.

Haven't read whole chapter yet. Just LOL'd at your opening statement.

Seems like you should've been a script writer for P4. Dojima actually saw them leave through a TV! Oh snap (insert other 4-letter S word)! And it seems like Kanji is just a little closer to confessing.

Looks like Naoto is slowly getting used to the team.

In superhero origin movies, its typical to view how they gained the superpowers; I think this is the first time I read about someone complaining about it LOL. Light and Dark is useful in the actual game, but I adjusted Izanagi to use those before Naoto even joined.

Too engrossed in the story to review every chapter. Its really great how you put every day in detail by expanding what the team did in the game/anime.

This was recommended so I thought I'd give it a shot. I like it so far and onto the next chapter.

I can't. I just can't read the next chapter. I know it would be a cliffhanger. D:

I'll just pretend that the story ended at this chapter.

Love the story BTW. A lot of thought was put into it. It's nice to bring more life to these characters, especially Souji.

POV feels spot-on. Could really empathize a lot on Kanji. And there are times you can't just help but give a big guy hug. BRAVO!

Interludes are great too. It gives a breather from Kanji's frustrations and understand Naoto's side.

I wish you weren't swallowed by the shadows. I kind of breaks my heart that the story is so close to conclusion that it abruptly stopped. Still, it's one hell of a roller coaster ride. Thanks. :D

:( I'm so sad this isn't finished...but I'm still going to follow and favorite anyways. It's too good.