Reviews for A Horse, Of Course
ICanStopAnytime chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
You've got the voices down. I'd like some narration and dialogue tags, but didn't really need them because you captured the voices well.
15Acesplz chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
Pffffft... this definitely happened.
Ketman chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
I like the way you didn't indicate who was speaking until the story was half done. That shows confidence in your powers of writing dialogue that's true to the characters, trusting the reader to fit the voice to the face. Well, your dialogue was so authentic, I was able to ID the speakers in no time at all. You really should write more of these little scenes.
Irene Moriarty chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Loved it! You've got the characters bang on! Perfect! Loved it! I'm rambling... But yeah it was great! Write more!
Funkyfish1996 chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
I wannna be a narwhal! That's a whale with a horn. :D
Maysehugs chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Short but sweet, a really good short story. You've got the charecters bang on right, especially Maggie. chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Haha! I like this light banter you have going on with the characters. Very well written.
KarliMeaghan chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I loved this! You've totally captured the characters perfectly, as well as the silly little conversations they have.