Reviews for SEALs
nermalasu chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
very intriguing! can't wait for more! oh and totally love em and jasper!
lilmissfireball chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
I like that you seem to really make an effort in your research instead of making it up as you go. I think thats terrific. But I haven't read anything that you have written that I haven't liked. I try to be completely unbiased. Wondering when you will have your first novel written though. Excited to know if Alice & Jazz will be having a girl or a boy.
flower123 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
well we've heard from edward when will bella make her appearance?update soon
cshorte chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
I like it! can't wait to read more!
Rose in Bloom 01 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
lovin it already... very well thought out! cant wait for the next chap!
cassig chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
i really like this so far...cant wait for the next chapter...!
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
I like your story and can't wait for more.
CJ1325 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
nice I am excited to read more and see where you go with this story
ieatzombies chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Interesting story so far! Can't wait to read more.
ClairyFairyTaily chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Hey, I really love this so pretty please with a cherry on top can you go on It's so so so TERRIFIC.
MyUnreliableMuse chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Ooh, I like this. I'm very intrigued by Navy SEALward. Please do keep going. I hope you'll update again soon!
sterryvit chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
WOW! That was great! I love sexy soldier Edward! Please update soon!
little-miss-randomness17 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
lol i don't really get offended (unless you called me fat, that's just low and every gal hates being called fat :p) so yea you could call me a f*cker and i'd say right on b*tch so yea swear away )
PinkSlytherin chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
LOVE the story! cant wait till bella comes in!
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