Reviews for SEALs
maggiejoma chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
very well written...:)
OliveTrusty chapter 11 . 9/30/2012
You've got my vote!
Naomi chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
I loved this story so much! Thank you so very much for writing and sharing it with us! Please please please keep the stories coming. I REALLY liked this idea for this story! Thanks so much!
DirtyEdward chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
well i really liked your story! it was amazing and i found it very well written. you seem to have a problem with edward and bella having children although you don't mind about the others. why so? so much hate 'cause of renesmee?:/
kselzer chapter 10 . 8/20/2012
Epilogue? With kids?
kselzer chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
Quite honestly, yeah I've seen the misspelling of probably, but I've been so wrapped up in the story, I havn't noticed anything else; to me,that is the definition of good writing.
kselzer chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
So I know I am joining this party late, and it is only the first chapter but I hope the acronym FUBAR is used some where in is one of my favorite military words.
ElisseJay chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
great story so far! love that this story is mostly in edwards POV
Debbie White chapter 10 . 3/15/2012
Great story i enjoyed it alot! :)
musicflare87 chapter 3 . 3/1/2012
:)
musicflare87 chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
good chapter! )
musicflare87 chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Good chapter
Nehnah14 chapter 9 . 1/15/2012
Dear God, how in the world did you pack so much into 9 short chapters?

The was brilliantly done! Thank you for sharing it.
Crazybee3 chapter 9 . 9/14/2011
That was great!

Thank you :)
la pitchoune chapter 10 . 8/30/2011
that was a great story and really well written. thanks for creating it and letting us see it.

have a good day.
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