|Reviews for Life After the War|
| Amara chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Please continue this story
| Ringo Beeblebrox chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Use a spell checker. Just look at this one sentence.
"I'm seriours Ginny, they would proboly kill me." She stoped and looked at me.
As for Creature/Kreacher, how could anyone read the books and think the character's name as spelled Creature. We first see it in print - spelled out. The pronunciation came later, so thinking "Well, I heard it pronounced that way" is NOT an excuse.
| Halstead84 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Kreacher, Kreacher, Kreacher!...
| Autumn chapter 5 . 10/14/2010
| kimera616 chapter 5 . 8/2/2010
well your first beta couldnt have done much there were a lot of typos no offence and it was way to scripted sounding use slang a bit like they did and the big one that got me cuz she is my favorite character Ginny has chocolate brown eyes
| LisiLouLah chapter 5 . 7/8/2010
I just found your story, I haven't been on the site for a little while. I've enjoyed what I've read so far, and I wouldn't mind being your beta, but I've never done it before, how does it work?
| Hijacked Headphones chapter 3 . 4/16/2010
I really like it so far, please update soon.
| navybrat4 chapter 3 . 4/4/2010
i really enjoyed this, but just one thing negative really the house elf "creature" in the book his name is Kreacher i don't know if you came up with creature but i thought yuou should know. please write more soon
| TheLonelyDancer chapter 3 . 2/21/2010
Could you please write more? Renesmee Cullen101
| Lady G 101 chapter 2 . 11/10/2009
Aww that was sweet...I find it kind of funny though cause harry reminds me a lot of Edward lol but great chapters kik
| DennyRose chapter 2 . 9/10/2009
| kimera616 chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
your a good writer but it should have been one chapter and still a bit longer. but still good storyline so far.
| David Fishwick chapter 2 . 9/2/2009
Cool beginning and please update soon thanks.