Reviews for Jasper's Promise
missy-history chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
please write more its really good!
JenavyMalfoy chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Aww! That was cute!
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
A great story. Very well written.
Stell chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
well i'm mad at both of u maria for changing him making him break the u for making that sweet little girl cry and say that
skarpia chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
aww..so sweet and sad! Your story is very good (: i almost felt like crying at the end! xD
Soccergirl0388 chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
you should make this into a longer story from the impression i got of jasper he was one of the southern gentlemen and would always keep his promise so i would be assumed he would try and keep it somehow after he lest maria
SpenceSince1993 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
i loved it. Jasper is one of my fav char so i was really sad and happy reading this. and no i wasnt happy in a morbid iwas happy cuz he kept his promise even tough she didnt know that

well done
Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
.It!It really shows their sibling I have only one word for it...WOW!:)
Mistyrious One chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
(speaks in spanish) O-M-G! Poor Jasper, poor Gracie, AW! Why do you always make me want to cry? What is wrong with you? just kidding, but between this chapter and the severus snape losing lily chapter and the Alan of Trebond dying Chapters, *sniff, sniff* I'm gonna be a sodden rag!

&BTW- I was looking at your profile and I started laughing. You want to know why? Well, besides the funny stuff you put on there, I noticed you also do the same thing I do when I write loser- put two o's making it looser. :) lol.
dancelikeyoujustdontcare chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
I had tears in my eyes by the end! Please write a sequel!
love2talk96 chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
O, how sad. At least he kept his promise
LilyIsAwesomerThanYou chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
This made me cry. It was so sad but Grace was really cute. I can totally imagine that, though. You're a great author.
MufasaRocks chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
That was too cute! I love Jasper, and Grace was so adorable!
Hicks07 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
awe I'm not even that big of a twilight fan but i read this and it's super cute
Luvthisstory chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
OMG! Love it but what will happen shouldn't Jasper keep his promise? Please dont' end it