Reviews for The Avenging Auror
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
This may sound rude and you will probably never read this but I think personally that you ruined the story with Severus and Sasha being together it seemed forced and when they got together you completely dismissed the bond between Severus and wee Sev. And the whole Severus loves Lily but he sees a random muggle that he doesn’t even know and he drops his feelings that been with him since before he went to Hogwarts unrealistic. Other than that I loved the story the other characters had a really nice development and character ark. But yeah Severus and Sasha made my teeth grind and me mad it was forced and pointless.
Guest chapter 34 . 12/8/2017
I know it sounds rude and you will probably never read this but I think personally that you ruined the story with Severus being with Sasha it seemed forced and when they got together you completely dismissed the bond shared between Severus and wee Sev ruining the story for me. And with the whole Severus loves Lily totally but then a random muggle comes along and he drops his feelings seems pretty ridiculous. Other than that I loved the story the other characters had lovely development arks. But yeah Sasha and Severus made me teeth grind and made me mad forced and pointless really.
Mitsukini Haninozuka chapter 34 . 8/17/2017
The most amazing story ever! I knew something was going on between Jethro and Henry. Lol.
knuckles 8 chapter 1 . 5/2/2017
Loved it. Thank you for sharing your story.
q.thews chapter 34 . 2/19/2017
That was a little chaotic and for most of it i was thinking that there was a too fast paced rhythm. Then i realized that it is in the tv series rhythm, not the book one (or at least that is how i get it ;-) ).
Thank you for sharing
Katalara chapter 34 . 1/29/2017
Just finished reading most of what you have posted here. Really sad there's no more! You have some really fun ideas, and I've greatly enjoyed your work!
natasha.jones.1654 chapter 34 . 6/23/2016
Bloody loved it I hope you write more stories.
elliejo98 chapter 8 . 3/26/2016
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Cassandra30 chapter 34 . 7/24/2015
Excellent story!
Cassandra30 chapter 32 . 7/24/2015
Excellent! Everything is as it should be. But who inherits DiNozzo Sr.'s estate?
Cassandra30 chapter 31 . 7/24/2015
I am glad Severus has someone and Sasha too. Nice prank on Lucius!
Cassandra30 chapter 30 . 7/24/2015
Excellent idea!
Cassandra30 chapter 29 . 7/24/2015
sniff Poor Sasha! Good for Severus!
Cassandra30 chapter 28 . 7/24/2015
Excellent!
Cassandra30 chapter 27 . 7/24/2015
Lovely!
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