Reviews for Just Another Tuesday Afternoon
cerulean1990 chapter 1 . 6/30
Holy shit!
I've never laughed so hard or frequently at such a short fic!
This is my new gold standard of comedy writing xD
P.T. Tucker chapter 1 . 3/18
lolol I love this story so much. It's the absolute best crack ever and it had me laughing so hard. I love Cloud's worried "why is there no crotch?" "why are there holes for the nipples?" that just gets interjected in between Zack and Sephiroth's conversation. lol and then the bakery burning down in only a week and Zack never stopping his ShinRa pay. XD Oh, that poor Cactuar too. I feel bad but it was hilarious. What a great fic. :3
guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
great from beginning to the end.
and the usual warning of 'reno' haha, i wonder who you should feel for who was stuffed together in the cake, reno ...or the cactuars, ha!
wonder who buys erotic cakes? o.o ...
VioletIsInPain chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Zack Fair: Cactuar Murderer Extraordinaire!

I'm actually surprised Sephiroth didn't skewer anyone...maybe he's the one that started the fire!?

(imagines him angrily stuffing horrified cactuars into the vent)
bbb136 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Genius idea. _ And kinda plausible too actually.
sakR9 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I never knew I could laugh so much.

How can you write this in such a hilarious way?

Pure genius I suppose!

Thanks for this!
ChocolateMilk2 chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
The cake is a lie.
Kusanagi Hikari chapter 1 . 11/21/2010

erotic cake shop... *snicker*

wonder what will happen if it real XD

thank you for this~
roo17 chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
haha I loved it! I loved what Zack said when the cactuar fell into the gutter. It made me crack up! :D
Tilare chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Very cute, funny and crazy.
The Laughing Fool chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Ha...HA HA HA HA HAHAHAHAHAhaha heh heh

You are one funny mofo, you know that? Your material is prime, A-grade hilarity in Fanfiction format.


Is your middle name ComedicTiming? Because it should be.


The Genesis Awards chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
I am extraordinarily pleased to inform you that your story, Just Another Tuesday Afternoon, has been nominated for The Genesis Awards Best Humour Category 2010. The Genesis Awards exists to reward the authors of FFVII fanfiction that show a certain standard of grammar and formatting, relevance to canon and characterization. Your story was nominated by quietncryptic and passed to the preliminary reading rounds because of the quality your story possesses. On April 15th, the Shortlisting for the Genesis Awards will take place, and on June 15th the final results will be tallied and posted.

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Nichigo chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Oh gosh, this is hilarious!
VellumMoon chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
*Giggle snort*

I absolutely love your Cloud/Zack/Sephiroth characterizations! The chemistry between these three leads me to falling out of my chair from laughter constantly. I just reread your other two fics with them, and laughed just a much as I did the first time.

Please continue with the humor, I need it!
Depopulating chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
That was absolutely amazing. Had me laughing from the very first sentence.


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