|Reviews for Ways to kill yourself in Fallout 3Revisited|
| Awesomehatyougotthere chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
| DarkHunter643 chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
hehehehehe that's funny
| The Grim fellow in the corner chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
It's good but kind of short
I have some suggestiong for ways to die.
in shallow water
to wrestle a yao gui
to fist fight a deathclaw
vering yourself in nuka cola and wandering into a giant ant hill
up in enclave armor and deciding to go trick or treating at the citadel
to zombie walk through a ghoul infested tunnel
the fat man launcher at something less than five feet from you
hopscotch in a mine field
the phrase "communism is great"In front of a group of mister gutsy robots.
on charon's shoes after a all night drinking bing in the ninth circle
Let me know what you think.
| Mike bent tone chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
clap clap. very nice.
| HeloHaloME chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Keep writing I didnt even know you did!
| vDiscord chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
| DistinctionDave chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
M, it was funny, but it's not a story, and thus doesn't really belong here.
Have you considered making it a story? That'd be hilarious; Bob could come back to life after each episode (a la Kenny from South Park) and instead of small snippets you could really engage the readers with a few hundred words of death-filled hilarity. Just an idea.
| The.Frost chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Lol, life sucks for Bob. More would be appreciated.
| Sanima chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Very well done. Short and a little choppy, but it works for this type of dictation. I laughed aloud while reading, which made the fellow free wi-fi-ers give me funny looks. I may have to sue for public humiliation.
There's a typo; jumping of a building. I like to jump off things, personally.
Also, a few instances of capitalization. Remember our proper nouns, now.
I'd very much like to see more of these little snippets. Keep up the good work.