Reviews for The Heart's Most Unwanted Desire
WonderWitch123 chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
I love how the beggings different from the rest of the fanfics I read, we'll done so far, I'm going to favorite it, keep writing please!
majorpotterhead chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
3
majorpotterhead chapter 22 . 8/26/2012
OMG.
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOO MUCH 3
THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT!
:)
Peanutsfan1823 chapter 22 . 3/29/2012
NOOOOOOO! CLIFF HANGER! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? WHY DOES IT END!
Peanutsfan1823 chapter 7 . 3/25/2012
Dear author,

Your Twatlight reference here is beautiful. I love you ten times more now. Will you marry me?

Love,

Peanuts
Pugs189 chapter 22 . 12/22/2011
Avanell

dude it was implied it was Scorp
DaisyEmerald1 chapter 22 . 7/29/2011
Sequel? There has to be a sequel right? Right? Otherwise you might as well just kill me I can't handle the suspense! I love this story so fluffy so dramatic lol great work!
kaitie chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
'the Forest Man'? haha. i'm already incredibly intrigued with this story! especially because of the ending!
Wazzy Wazlib chapter 22 . 3/24/2011
"Maniac who attacked me say whaaat?"
Wazzy Wazlib chapter 21 . 3/24/2011
"Griffins?"

"Greyback?"

The two adults were gobsmacked. "I can't believe it—you're the Healer Rose has been with?" Octavius asked, unable to hide his surprise.

"You two know each other?" Blood asked as he was running past to find another evil henchman to bully.

"I haven't seen you since…you know," Avanell said, suddenly frowning.

Octavius's eyes suddenly flashed, "As I recall, it was you who called it off."

"Called what off?" Blood asked as he did a back handspring to avoid his oncoming opponent.

"Me?" Avanell looked absolutely livid. "You were the one who called it off!"

"Where on God's blue Earth did you get that idea from?" he demanded.

"My father told me—" she suddenly smacked a hand to her forehead. "Of course my father told me that."

"Your father told me you never wanted to see me again," Octavius snarled.

"Who's father?" Blood interjected, wielding a dagger at the wizard attempting to blast him into a million tiny pieces.

"And you believed him?" Avanell demanded.

"Are you saying it wasn't true?"

"Why would I tell my father I never wanted to see my fiancé ever again?" Avanell yelled.

Blood's mouth dropped. "You guys were engaged?"

"Shut up!" they both screamed at Blood.

"Didn't see that coming," Edgard commented on his way past.

"To be married?" Blood went on, kicking his enemy in the chest.

At the same time, Avanell and Octavius pulled out their wands and blasted an evil wizard sneaking up on the latter.

"We're trying to have a heart to heart chat here!" Octavius roared at the wizard who had unsuccessfully tried in killing Avanell.

"Then why didn't you come back?" Avanell asked, more than a little hurt.

Octavius frowned. "I didn't know you wanted me to."

"It seems to me the whole thing was a misunderstanding!" Blood yelled, successfully disarming his attacker. "So kiss and make up already!"

"It wouldn't change anything," Octavius said, "would it, Nell?"

"Nell?" Blood repeated, looking slightly disturbed.

Avanell had tears in her eyes now. "I never stopped loving you."

"Oh, ick," said Blood as Octavius stepped closer to her, his face still shocked.

"After all this time?"

"Oi! In the middle of a war, in case you didn't notice!" Sami yelled at them.

"No time to get all kissy, Octavius!" Fuzz called.

"You're one to talk," said Crow. "I saw you and Sami snogging earlier—"

"We weren't snogging—"

"Everybody quiet!" Avanell snapped. "We'll talk later," she told Octavius.

"No, we'll talk now."

Everyone in hearing distance groaned and slapped their hands to their foreheads.
Wazzy Wazlib chapter 20 . 3/24/2011
And I thought the LAST chapter was long! Awesome update.
Wazzy Wazlib chapter 19 . 3/24/2011
Long chapter :P
Wazzy Wazlib chapter 18 . 3/24/2011
You should bring Edgard back, in the sequel. He was amusing.
Wazzy Wazlib chapter 17 . 3/24/2011
Algernon. Hahahahaha, nice one.
Sunshine Ana Cloudyday chapter 7 . 2/20/2011
lol nice Twilight reference. love this story! It's so sweet. :)
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