Reviews for Oblivion |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! Thank you for writing it! |
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![]() ![]() awesome! ...what's whump? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read the whole story and all I can say is I hope the FBI has a good health insurance plan. Or maybe take Charlie serious and put a GPS chip in Colby. Only thing left is have his pants catch on fire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! Colby's gonna be fine! and Jasmine is TOTALLY in love with him lol (although, who could blame her, right!) :) great job so far, i cant wait to see what else you have in store! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Colby... poor, poor Colby! but he's still so nice to Jasmine! i just LOVE him! anywho, just a random fact, i noticed you say "round" when here we say "around." (at least, in the US we say that!) it means totally the same thing but whatever! random. great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor Colby! he's just not having any luck! great chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, that's creepy! a funeral wreath and that creepy note... that was pretty clever though! or at least, i think so. awesome job so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() really great! hope the action starts soon! (sorry if i seem impatient, i am in a really excited mood and want something to happen!) this is a really good story, great job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! wow, i just realized how long its been since i started reading this... its really good so far! i cant help but think that this Jasmine girl is not a good person but thats just me. Great job so far! and sorry i just kind of stopped reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, figure watching in the shadows from across the street, im guessing thats not a good thing! well, this chapter was really good! i cant wait to continue reading! Merry Christmas btw! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was freaking awesome. Loved it from the first chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT. CANT WAIT FOR U TO FINIH 'EMERGENCE' |
![]() ![]() ![]() CANT STOP READING THIS, ITS JUST AS ADDICTING AS THE 'EMERGENCE' STORY TAHT I AM READING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WELL THIS ANSWERS MY QUESTION ON WHO JASMINE IS. IM READING THE 'EMERGENCE' STORY AND I WAS WONDERING WHO JASMINE WAS. |