Reviews for Weaknesses
Vergil Leonidas chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
Well it seems a bit out of character for Rza to be afraid of something like thunder but it can easily be overlooked if you take the fact that thunder is often accompanied by rain and thus when the two combine both Roy and Riza and kinda useless, well for Roy is downright useless... Either way nice and short story.
hongying0217 chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
The end is very wonderful !I look forward to your next fanfiction,a longer one.
colorful mist chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
I loved it! Thanks for making a good oneshot! :)
colorful mist chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
I loved it! Thanks for making a good oneshot! :)
sophiekeseki chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Heh heh, i thought it was cute :3

great job for a first~
Rojas Walrus chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Short, but fairly original. I like originallity But still, very short. If you drag it out a bit more than it would be a lot better. A proton and an electron. (If your confused about my review system, then I'm sorry. I have atom on the brain, so my apologies. Also, I try to be as honest as I can be. This is an attemp to be helpful, not condesending)
infinitemoonlight chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Aww...

Nice fic! XD
little miss clueless chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
that's HOT! Love it!
Athena's Heart chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Great story. To the point but still pretty awesome :)
Scentsy chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Cute! Riza seems just a tad out of character, but Roy seems perfect.
madbutterfly chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Not bad for your first. It ended a bit abruptly though.