Reviews for Weaknesses
hongying0217 chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
The end is very wonderful !I look forward to your next fanfiction,a longer one.
colorful mist chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
I loved it! Thanks for making a good oneshot! :)
colorful mist chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
I loved it! Thanks for making a good oneshot! :)
sophiekeseki chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Heh heh, i thought it was cute :3

great job for a first
Rojas Walrus chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Short, but fairly original. I like originallity But still, very short. If you drag it out a bit more than it would be a lot better. A proton and an electron. (If your confused about my review system, then I'm sorry. I have atom on the brain, so my apologies. Also, I try to be as honest as I can be. This is an attemp to be helpful, not condesending)
infinitemoonlight chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Aww...

Nice fic! XD
little miss clueless chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
that's HOT! Love it!
Athena's Heart chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Great story. To the point but still pretty awesome :)
Scentsy chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Cute! Riza seems just a tad out of character, but Roy seems perfect.
madbutterfly chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Not bad for your first. It ended a bit abruptly though.