|Reviews for Children|
| aangismyhomie chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
Wow! This is a really interesting concept. You have a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but aside from that it's fine. Keep writing!
| xSamx chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
wow, this is a great story! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
| SparkleBlueLemon chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
So Gar has a new girlfriend?
| Wolvmbm chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
Please do keep up the great work upon this good idea of yours as it showed that Raven had hurt Garfield in a way that is unforgivable. :(
It also shows that in a way she hurted herself as well by having her child and sticking through with it even though it isn't Garfield's. :(
I must say this is some story and in many ways it shows that deep down Raven still have feelings for Garfield, but is afraid of what would happen if she reacted on those feelings. :(
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great idea for an even greater story. ;)
| Nos482reborn chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
I love this story so far I hope you update soon I'm Hooked like a carp!
| Wolvmbm chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Nice idea! :D
I mean WOW, it's been a while since I've last read from you, but you taken the Raven and Garfield relationship to a whole new level. :D
I didn't think you had it in you. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great idea like this one. ;)
| titanfan45 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Glad to see you posting another story. You're off to a great start on a very promising story line. I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out.