|Reviews for Corridor Conversations|
| LavernaG chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
This was a lovely story. Conveniently simple and not too long. It's good to read something light once in a while. Thank you for this story.
| Aqua Mage chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
| Aleize Claire chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Very nice! I laughed so hard! "First years to terrorize, papers to grade."
"Not at the moment." had me laughing so hard!
| DailyProphetEditor chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Nice friendship fic, I like it.
| Poirot'sMustacheMask chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
A great story. Very well written.
| StarTrekFan83 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I could have sworn up and down that I read this story a few years ago. It seemed super familiar. Anyway it's a great friendship story between Severus and Minerva. I rather enjoyed it. I do agree that it would have been more readable in the past tense .. but the present tense was all right.
| Sophia Anya Lee chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
I love SnapeMinerva friendship fics! This one was amazingly done. Faved.
| meltedpoo chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Snape with chocolates in his robes is most bizarre, indeed
But that was really cute
I mean, McGonagall and Snape are both being stubborn
So I guess the character is captured quite well enough
And just so you know, I THINK Umbitch is in the Hospital Wing at the time McGonagall arrived
Forgive me if I am wrong, though :D
Anyway, great fic
| kissingonconey chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
I liked this very much - good friendship fic.
I think the chocolate was handled well by Minerva's comments about how ridiculous it is (and, Severus is right, it's good to have on hand) - but yes, it did seem out of character.
In response to your other reviewer - I see nothing wrong with using present tense. It's different, certainly, but I doubt you needed an inane grammar lesson. Good on you to use present tense!
Very nice. :)
| CYMKK09 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Nice story,but it's weird when Severus passed chocohate to Minerva(It's so Lupin-Style)
| Merida Hughsie chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Nice story. Severus is very nice and I think you wrote them all in character.
| b chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Stories like this ought to be written in the past tense.
For instance, instead of:
“I won’t tell,” she teases. After a moment she adds seriously, “I do understand, Severus.”
It should be:
“I won’t tell,” she teased. After a moment she added seriously, “I do understand, Severus.”
Other than that, I think you have a very nice story here and I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future.