Reviews for In the Rough
puion chapter 1 . 2/20
Wow this was intense... i love Rui here. Always been a secret shipper of what Rui and Yuki can be. Haha, so this is up my alley.

Thank goodness for a sequel wooohooo! Thanks so much for writing!
Secrecy chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Amazing...had my heart in a clutch..One of the best Soujiroh and Yuki fanfics..Gave Yuki's character more prominence and portrayed the emotions hidden in Soujiroh's running away very well..Kudos :D
MidnightRosebud chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Love how Sojirou's mother catches on right away, and already approves of her. That was an interesting twist. So was the ending actually. I did not expect Yuuki to do that, and I feel bad for Rui. Sighs~ He always seems to end up as the punching bag when all he's doing is helping. XD
Apple Yumi 94 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
i was totally just thinking that i wanted to shoot u for ending it like this but now that i know this is a trilogy i will say that u are totally awesome! lol i say 8/10 stars for this story so far! _
starryblue1994 chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
This first part of story was so incredible. You did an excellent job with Rui and his scheme was brilliant. The ending came as a shocking part to me as I read it.
florabloom101 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
OMG! OMG! I luff the story. I really hated Soujirou at the begining and I felt really sorry for Yuuki but at the end, i felt bad for the both of them. Now I'm off to reading the sequal, Gravity.
gorbachop chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
i cant say it was good.. it was EXELLENT! XD
miniwoo chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
oh, thank god this ain't over. I didn't think she'd actually sleep with him though. Good for her!
azerjaban chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Wow thats deep. I really felt al the emotions you wanted to portray.

Though Rui is a little out of character here- but I like that you did not use Akira.
bosk chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Truly awesome! I was ready to scream just before I read that you had a sequel XD.
SbM-aNgIe chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I like this new Yuki, she left Soujiro alone in the bed, so cruel, so cool, I want see the sequel soon.

excelent fic.

Angie_SBM.
5knockout5 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
hey! i hope you upload the sequel soon! :) twas a very nice story :)
lady555 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
i enjoyed it, it was great
raineheart chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
that was wonderful! i felt as if soujiro deserved it but i can't help but be sad especially with your line about how broken he is.. can't wait for the sequel, i sort of panicked when i saw that it ended.. good thing you have the author's note.. hehe
tetsi chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
oh, can't wait for the sequel. I like the setting with Rui (and not Akira), because it's more believeable when it's the quiet one who goes against Soujiro.
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