oh man this is so good the images are so beautiful just ahhhhhhh

Sweet. I've been sucker for Dorothy and Ozma as a couple for a long time, and this is an interesting take on it.

nice

I think you should know how much this story has effected me. I read it years ago and at the beginning could not grasp why Dorothy did not just stay. Its the same thing I ask myself everytime I watch the Tim Burton Alice and Wonderland. But since reading it I have thought about it alot, especially at times when I have had to make hard decisions. I have always wanted to be a teacher with dreams of making the world a better place through the shaping of young minds, but have always seen that dream as frivolous and naive. But this story has made me persevere, because if Dorothy can do it, then so can I. I don't know if you even check this account anymore, but if you do, you should know that because of this story I am now pursuing my dreams in college and getting very close to accomplishing my goals. As a lesbian in an unaccepting society it has been hard to put myself out there, but your story, and the magic of Oz has given me a very firm push. So thank you. Very much.

Well it was nice but I didn't expect it to be a romance between Ozma and Dorthy I thought it was gonna be those best friend thing or Ozma loving Dorthy like a sister but to have the "boy" version of Ozma and Dorthy married seem a little like a lesbian story between Ozma and Dorthy if you don't mind saying so. Anyway great job very creative if you have any more "Ozma in love" stories great but next time don't do a romance between Dorthy and Ozm Wizard of Oz fan myself but I don't like the relationship between Gale and the pricess

You've got to be kidding Me!

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Well, I didn't see that coming! I figured Dorothy would stay in Oz - it would be hard not to. Well done!

I love a love story.