|Reviews for Cave in|
| Headoverheels14 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Very cute! I liked the line "Sound off if you gotta pair." Very funny.
| supernaturalsammy67 chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
ohh LOVED it!
| bhoney chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Nice. A little suspense there, glad it was just the cavalry coming to the rescue.
Oh, I don't know if you noticed, but your formatting of Cave Monster got a little messed up.
| petey L chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
hey this is a great story. i thnnk it would be really cool if you expanded it but hey thats just me
| UpstairsMind chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Loved it! :D
| Ash8 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
You're on FF!... (I swear I'm not stalking ya...!)
You know I really enjoyed this. You got the boys voices spot on this... which I reckon must be pretty hard to do. But then I think just writing must be pretty hard to do...
| 494dwangel chapter 1 . 8/30/2009