|Reviews for Moonshadow: a Twilight Bella and Jacob Story|
| alh1971 chapter 1 . 2/19
"Bella, look around you. Everyone is damaged, it just sort of happens, living." His dark eyes stared off at something far distant. "You have to choose to mend. And then you have to keep on choosing it."
I just started re reading this gem and wanted to highlight these profound words...
| unknown chapter 1 . 1/30
I love the chapter 1. It is so good I can't stop reading GReat job 5 stars so far.
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 16 . 12/14/2013
Sam and Paul... promise to Bella...?
Exactly what promise is she talking about here?
| mharrison9101 chapter 20 . 10/31/2013
I loved the entire story especially the ending. Things with Bella and Edward seemed unfinished since I've hardly read a fic where he doesn't come back in some way or another. The fact that she takes a perfect opportunity to shove her new life in his face may be a little mean and f'd up, but I think it was awesome. Not that she really needed the closure, but Bella needed to a way to say screw you, Edward needed to know she was happy in her new life, and Jacob's ego (and other things)can always use a little extra stroking :) Great job and thank you so much for sharing such a great story!
| mharrison9101 chapter 19 . 10/31/2013
I loved this extremely sappy chapter! Now I've got all kinds of warm fuzzies :)
| Smurfie chapter 8 . 9/1/2013
I'm loving the book so far however the "honey" thing doesn't suit Jacob at all
| Smurfie chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Amazing! And finally :p however Jacob seems a bit desperate while Bella seems as though she is taking the "left over" love she had for Edward and throwing it onto the next best thing
| Tanisha chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
It was really good. its different but defentily good
| Neha chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
Seth's entry was superb !
G8 thing .. reading all chapters ..
| chloe chapter 20 . 6/2/2013
Amazing. The original ending pissed me off haha. Well written. :)
| Candi chapter 3 . 4/6/2013
I love this so much right now. Just wish it were me.
| Candi chapter 20 . 4/6/2013
Damn! I love this! God bless your soul.
| ChrissiHR chapter 20 . 4/4/2013
I LOVE this ending. A very fitting note for HER to end their relationship on. Sometimes, to get closure, a girl just needs to rub her ex's fucking face in it, you know? 'Mean' implies malicious intent. She's not the creepy stalker eavesdropping ex listening in to her rival's thoughts. I don't think it's malicious to teach a peeping ex a lesson! It's just!
| Kayloucy chapter 3 . 3/1/2013
Omg, this is soooo good! Please promise you won't stop!
| devanyshanea chapter 20 . 2/13/2013
Im in love omg! The end where **spoiler alert; Jake mind talks shit towards Edward***gold! Abosolutely the best, omg. Great ending, and the lemon scenes helped me sleep «wink,wink »love