Reviews for When you're gone
Broncogirl99 chapter 5 . 6/10/2015
You have a gift. When some one can be in tears while the other is smiling like an idiot at YOUR work. That is truly a gift. This story proves that you have this gift.
bamachick127 chapter 5 . 10/15/2011
*SOB* im crying my eyes out i would have killed tink i mean he saved her life and then she go's and dose that if she didn''t wendy would have gone back to never land and been with peter FOREVER or atleast a while then they both would go bac to eath and grow up and get maried and so on maybe go back to never land and raise there children or something vist it at least
Anonymous chapter 5 . 2/5/2011
Brilliant story, but...WHERE IS THE FLIPPING LOVE, IT SHOULD BE WD/PP NOT WENDY AND FLIPPING WOTS HIS FACE!...Anywho bravo in general for rest.
katigirl97 chapter 5 . 12/29/2010
Arpie chapter 2 . 11/29/2009
This is sad! sob sob...:( Oh well, good story but...
Barbiegirl 22 chapter 5 . 10/21/2009
it was a good ending to a great story and i cant wiat to see more of your work. keep up the writing and i thought the ending was sweet!

barbie D
Alexandria-sama chapter 2 . 10/18/2009
aw thats sad! bring them back together somehow! please?
Barbiegirl 22 chapter 4 . 10/11/2009
good chapter will peter take the kid to neverland? and peter is so going to kick smees butt!

update soon!

barbie D
Blue Tenshi chapter 3 . 10/5/2009
Cool story! I can't wait to read what will happen next. Please post another chapter soon! Thanks
Fireminess chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
After watching sad ending of Peter Pan, I really needed a light story like this one. awesome. :)
Barbiegirl 22 chapter 3 . 10/1/2009
awesome this chap was really good esspecially for someone with writers block and watching lost. i really think its hilarious capn smee! lol. man thats good. will wendy come back to neverland with him or will harry make her stay? we'll find out in the next exciting chapter of when youre gone.


barbie D
Barbiegirl 22 chapter 2 . 8/31/2009
well well, were to start. for starters great plot i like the story and poor tink. now for the fix its. TINKERBELL DOES NOT SQUEAK! SHE RINGS, LIKE A BELL, THUS TINKERBELL! HER NAME IS NOT TINKERSQUEAK IT IS TINKERBELL! now thats out of the system. disney made return to neverland in 2001 i think, but the real live one was made in 2003 by universal so u might want to fix that. also you are right abou tink having fellings for peter. sujestion harry gets wake up call of a life time and sees peters wild sid or or even better hook lives.

smile and fix the tink thing