|Reviews for Flat Line|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
This was utterly pointless. And not even the least bit Interesting.
| HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
| Ailisraevyn chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
So sad, and so true. It happens a lot in life.
"The world turned white" was my favorite line.
| GreenEyedGirl13 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
OMG this is soo sad.
so beautifully written.
aw poor and bella and edward.
Is she dead?
My gosh I'm crying.x
| Gryffindorgirlatheart chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
this was an amazing story i felt the pain Edward Felt and its almost as if i was standing there watching it happen myself great job : )
| Delcesca Newby chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
This is so sad, but well written. I like how their memories flip-flopped. That was pretty cool. Good job!
| Anton M chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Yup, it's me.
I told you, ME.
*off to vote for you*
| Bella'sExecutioner chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
that was pretty dark my dear. Very good job. It makes me want to never drive at night anymore. HA!.
| my2galspal chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
That was amazing! I'm really hoping this is more of a cliff hanger and that you plan on continuing this story. I think it has wonderful potential.
I love the idea of Bella and Edward switching places as their "lives flash before their eyes". What a creative idea. I've never seen anything like it before. I'm hopeful that Bella's last vision is a bit of foreshadowing actually.
Thanks so much for sharing this story. I hope we get to see more. Best of luck in the contest.
| TheInsatiableVampire chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Completely friggin' random, utterly sad, and very confusing.
Still manages to be amazing though.
Extra points on originality. x
| Miss Snazzy chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
That was so sad, but good. (
| AnaG chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
I enjoyed this one shot immensely.
It strikes me as original and very well written. You have a nice, well-rounded style of prose that appeals to me - focusing on a few details that will construct the image while still leaving plenty for me to imagine.
I honestly hope you expand this one shot into something more, though I understand that it is perfect as is.
Thank you for sharing.
| misskma chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
You have got me hooked. I hope you continue this when the contest is over?
| Book2romantic chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I'm very tempted to actually drop you six hundred lines.
Why did we all agree to have these not be longer stories for so long? I want there to be a couple more chapters to this one.
| Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
That was really good. Sad, but it was supposed to be. Great job