|Reviews for Eleven Times|
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
I liked how you said that them on one of Dean's visits arguing but not talking about the reasons Sam left the family for Stanford was what caused them not to speak for 2 years.
Dean definitely needed to know Sammy keeps count of how many close calls he's seen Dean wounded with.
| Katherine chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
awe! that was sweet and really great,perfect if you ever wanted to go back to this story you could write about the ghost that tossed Dean out the window.
| Heartless BytchhakaHelenBach1 chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
"Well, most people are nuts and they don't know a good thing when they see it."
Damn straight.:) I loved this little story.
"We survive coz we got each other."
Awwwwww, I can't help but wonder if this is where they're going this season. I think it's very possible. Now get them Boys outta that snow storm and in a warm motel room somewhere.
| TheKritty chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
That was SO heartwarming and yet SO heartbreaking!
You captured season1!boys so so so well, and also the angstyness of season 1! Love the brotherly love and interaction here, and GUH!, the H/C! *sighs happily*
This is awesome!
| Rosetta Brunestud chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Aw they are just cute DD
Sammy all angst and counting the times Dean nearly died... That was so sweet
And Dean is always great ahahah I can't resist him DD
Well, really good
See ya next o/
| Lykosdracos chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
I love it when Dean curses. Makes me smile every time. Nothing like a rugged, masculine guy who knows his way around swear words. Kudos to you for using them so well.
Ignoring the pain, the pulling, the cutting of thousands of thick shards of glass, and the rather large one shoved in his right calf
- Ouch! Oh man, that's really not good and very sad-making.
We’ve far surpassed the ‘just some cuts’ by a few gallons of blood.”
- Highly inappropriate, but that line made me laugh.
Dean reacted very little; he bore it all in his usual stoic silence, save for the clenched jaw and controlled breathing
- I love that, too. Reminds me of Logan without healing powers. Gotta love Wolverine. :D
Hey, any day above ground is a good day
- Agreed. Whole-heartedly.
Humor, angst, sentimental moments and hope. A potent combination and you blend them well. :)
| LovinJackson chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
Hey! This was really cool. Broody Sam, Hurt Dean ... what more could a girl ask for hehe
Loved this ;)
| bhoney chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Aw, this was lovely. Love the idea that Sam's kept track of the number of times Dean almost died, and loved Dean's attempt at comforting him by pointing out he'd beaten the odds all those times.
I loved this: "The many hunts over the years, the many close calls, too many for him to recount individually. They stretched out before him, longer than the many roads they’d traveled. Together. As a family. Many of them in this very car." Great image.
This made me laugh: "Like Bobby says, if it weren’t for bad luck we’d have no luck at all. So, we survive out of sheer will and stubbornness.” Too true.
LOVED this: “We survive coz we got each other.”
Very nice bit of hurt/comfort. A scene I could see playing out on the show, just like this. I'm putting this in my favorites!
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Schmoop and h/c at their finest, my dear. :)
Very satisfying. Angsty/caring!Sam and hurt!Dean (a personal favorite) very well done. :)
| greendaypumpkin chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Aww that was really sweet, especially the last few lines. Good work.
| InSecret chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I'm so crap. I keep missing stuff ... I really really like this. For a lot of reasons I'm too lazy to detail, but I do. A lot a lot. The banter is just great. Awesome awesome awesome.
| K Hanna Korossy chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
That was very sweet. I'm not sure I could distinguish between Sam's two statements about why he went to school, but the bottom line, of not wanting to see Dean in close shave after close shave until it was one too many, that's a very valid one, and one it probably helps Dean more than it hurts him to hear. I very much can see that being Sam's reasoning, too. Good air clearing, even if they do it Winchester style, in a snowstorm, in the car, bleeding!
| RavannaVen chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I love it. :-)
Good idea, good implementation, good descriptions and good story.
Thanks for writing.
| CiZiwejes chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Dean is truly a great big brother in here. He always managed to ground Sam back though he was obviously in pain. I love the brotherly bond you pictured in here, so true about them that they wouldn't survive without each other. Thank you for bringing that back when there was too much broken bond in the recent season.
Love this story till the last bit. You're good! Awesome job!
| Mad Server chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
I love Dean thinking he's going to puke with the pain, and pressing his hot head against the car window, and the image of Sam crammed into the footspace.