Reviews for Freedom Is An Image In One's Mind
Lost chapter 4 . 8/16/2011
I relly think the stories you write is good and im going to ( at least try) read every story. I really like the stories whit near, mello and Matt! Please continue to write more awesome stories!
rainbowMonstrosity chapter 11 . 2/27/2011
This story is so indescribably awesome, its...indescribable? Ugh, I don't know. Wow, Naomi? If anyone, I would've thought Lidner would've been Mello's sister.
thesinofawesomeness chapter 16 . 1/8/2011
i love this so much i have been reading this sence 10:30 it is now just 12:00 wow i have to so say the russhen(sp?) made me mad but in all this is awesome going to read more of your works in deathnote
Yami - The Devil's Advocate chapter 16 . 10/1/2010
i've never really been a fan of the hole mello/near paring but this was a good one I really liked it :)
SerenadeInTheMoonlight chapter 16 . 9/4/2010
Amazing story. I adore the idea. Please update soon?
lahfp9ay637qogfaff chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
L is Near's brother! L is Near's brother! :D
chocoluver646 chapter 8 . 6/7/2010
If you wanna kill Mikami, grab a spork.

If you wanna kill Mikami, grab a spork.

If you wanna kill Mikami, and you can't find a fork,

If you wanna kill Mikami, grab a spork.

That made me giggle 3
HiM'e'iTSu chapter 16 . 2/1/2010
Hm, this story is really good. I enjoyed reading it a lot. I like your style, it's easy to read but interesting nonetheless...

There is only one thing, though...those phrases in Russian. Did you use a translator to write them? Because, well, the spelling is right and sometimes grammar too, bot mostly they are absolutely incorrect in meaning. So it spoils the impression of the whole fanfic. I know it probably doesn't really matter, since I suppose there are not many people who can understand Russian on this site, but still those phrases sounded so strange sometimes so it made me want to laugh in the situation in the story when the characters were supposed to have a serious or sad conversation.

I don't want to offend you by saying it, because all in all I liked the story:)
RusCSI chapter 16 . 12/19/2009
Hello )

I've read your story and found it amazing - nobody before tried to write Russian. I like the idea of Russia as Mello's native country, he becomes closer to me :3

But... this Russian is a very bad and often wrong - grammar mistakes and translation mistakes... It really does look like if you took Google and use it for the translation (I'm sure you did ). I do know Russian (I'm a native Russian). All your phrases in English are really simple, but their translation through Google was wrong (Russian is a difficult language, but even vice versa translation is worse) and it looks not good. I can offer you my help with translating phrases normally since Russian is really my native, all you need to do is just answer and agree or disagree...

Hm, maybe I'm the first Russian who've found this story...

Btw, I adore Itsy-Bitsy spider's song...one of my favourite... Итси-Битси паучок...

Sincerely,

Helen
Somnum Careat chapter 16 . 10/16/2009
Wait is this over? I'm not sure cause it doesn't say it is. Anyway this is an awesome story! I hope it doesn't end here. Well, it was a great chapter.
Margurite Williams -Fem Canada chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
Great chapter!
MyColdHeart chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
LOL

awesome chapers!

"DO they EVER speak in English?"
methegirl chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
AMAZING! I am so excited you finally got them together! Wonderful job, keep up the good work
Josephine Falnor chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
Awe, that was sweet! I'm so glad you updated. So, is that it for this story, or will there be a little more?

The reunion of Mihael with his family was so perfect. I'm glad he got to see them again. _
Margurite Williams -Fem Canada chapter 15 . 9/30/2009
Great chapter!
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