|Reviews for New start|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
AAAHHHHHHHHHHH... I LOVE IT!
| randimo chapter 3 . 1/18/2012
oooooooohhhhhhhhhhh tis is gonna get interesting...
| HinataMarie chapter 3 . 12/14/2011
I really liked it. Your really good. Please update soon.
| starless-ocean chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
WOW! I just started to read Rust Blaster online and thought: Want to have more of it! This fanfic is soooo great! Really like it, but wonder when it's settled? after the story? And how did he get captured?
| Hiruko the Baku chapter 3 . 6/7/2010
Its going great! Keep writing! ...and add more alxKei parts! 8D
| ireadtoomanybooks chapter 3 . 11/26/2009
Me again :D "he placed his hand over his head as he felt gilt and anger overflow him so fast." gilt guilt; so fast you should probably just cut that out :D "a really pail looking face he was also gripping onto his arm." pail pale; looking face he was gripping onto his arm. looking face as he gripped his arm. "Wow you look pailer than pail." pailer paler; pail pale "He had easily caught the bag of blood with out braking it open with his sharp nails." braking breaking; probably put a fullstop after open. "His face didn’t looks so pail" pail pale "Aldred joined Faye in the laughing,
but their laughing was soon interrupted by a knock on the door." makes more sense if you say: laughing, but they were soon interrupted by... "pointing at Aldred with pink cheeks of embarrassment." pink cheeks of embarrassment cheeks pink with embarrassment "Your just a weapon…." your you're "‘I feel to tired to get up and" to too (first time) "Kei felt more securer and relaxed now" securer secure... Love it :D
| KatieKannible chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
amazingg! i love it very much, please keep writing and including alxkei! looking forward to your next chapter.
| Moldy Milk chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
Kyaa~ I really loved it! New chapter! NAO! *looks at when chapter 3 was published* oh, you published it yesterday XD there was a bit of repeating with words, one time you went from present tense (Aldred chuckled. “Oh now aren’t you jealous, eh?” Aldred has a sly look on his face.) and a few weak words, but I loved it anyway! Can't wait for the next chapter, more yaoi please! :)
| reddoggie chapter 3 . 11/22/2009
dang, i wonder who kei was dreaming about? he was creepy! aldred! go to kei and make his bad dreams go away. and thanks for updating!QQ
| ireadtoomanybooks chapter 2 . 11/18/2009
Very nice :D Can I beta for you? Coz you tend to get homophones wrong... like whole and hole, pail and pale :D Good though!
| CrystalRoseSkull chapter 2 . 10/21/2009
Yesh! Bring me scenes of the pairing I adore so much!
I love AldredXYosgara A LOT and all but I also love another!
((Bring the pairing "TOL" or i'll eat you...))
| Mellory chapter 2 . 10/19/2009
BLOOM, FLOWERS OF FLAME, CRIMSON SAKURA PRINCESS!
(Hrm... Apsa.. some healing please...)
What develish way to end this Chapter!
Though I know, how hard it is to keep the audience satisfied, and keep on living in the real world, I beg u to continue the story asap _ *drool over*
| Mellory chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Nice start. I'm hoping for more. o
| reddoggie chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
what? who is the person kei sees?XO i need to know! you should know who im rooting for! heh, i love Aldred and Kei! i loved reading the manga, wish it kept going, but maybe its better it didnt. im dying to know whatll happen next!QQ
| KeikoYosugaraKei's sister chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
I like how your story is going. This manga is awesome, but i'm sad that there's not that many people that read it. I wish there were more stories and I wish the author made it a little bit longer. I love the pairing KeixAl they are just so cute! hope you continue this story soon.