Reviews for New start
Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
randimo chapter 3 . 1/18/2012
oooooooohhhhhhhhhhh tis is gonna get interesting...
HinataMarie chapter 3 . 12/14/2011
I really liked it. Your really good. Please update soon.
starless-ocean chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
WOW! I just started to read Rust Blaster online and thought: Want to have more of it! This fanfic is soooo great! Really like it, but wonder when it's settled? after the story? And how did he get captured?
Hiruko the Baku chapter 3 . 6/7/2010
Its going great! Keep writing! ...and add more alxKei parts! 8D
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 3 . 11/26/2009
Me again :D "he placed his hand over his head as he felt gilt and anger overflow him so fast." gilt guilt; so fast you should probably just cut that out :D "a really pail looking face he was also gripping onto his arm." pail pale; looking face he was gripping onto his arm. looking face as he gripped his arm. "Wow you look pailer than pail." pailer paler; pail pale "He had easily caught the bag of blood with out braking it open with his sharp nails." braking breaking; probably put a fullstop after open. "His face didn’t looks so pail" pail pale "Aldred joined Faye in the laughing,

but their laughing was soon interrupted by a knock on the door." makes more sense if you say: laughing, but they were soon interrupted by... "pointing at Aldred with pink cheeks of embarrassment." pink cheeks of embarrassment cheeks pink with embarrassment "Your just a weapon…." your you're "‘I feel to tired to get up and" to too (first time) "Kei felt more securer and relaxed now" securer secure... Love it :D
KatieKannible chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
amazingg! i love it very much, please keep writing and including alxkei! looking forward to your next chapter.
Moldy Milk chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
Kyaa~ I really loved it! New chapter! NAO! *looks at when chapter 3 was published* oh, you published it yesterday XD there was a bit of repeating with words, one time you went from present tense (Aldred chuckled. “Oh now aren’t you jealous, eh?” Aldred has a sly look on his face.) and a few weak words, but I loved it anyway! Can't wait for the next chapter, more yaoi please! :)
reddoggie chapter 3 . 11/22/2009
dang, i wonder who kei was dreaming about? he was creepy! aldred! go to kei and make his bad dreams go away. and thanks for updating!QQ
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 2 . 11/18/2009
Very nice :D Can I beta for you? Coz you tend to get homophones wrong... like whole and hole, pail and pale :D Good though!
CrystalRoseSkull chapter 2 . 10/21/2009
Yesh! Bring me scenes of the pairing I adore so much!

I love AldredXYosgara A LOT and all but I also love another!

((Bring the pairing "TOL" or i'll eat you...))
Mellory chapter 2 . 10/19/2009

(Hrm... Apsa.. some healing please...)

What develish way to end this Chapter!

Though I know, how hard it is to keep the audience satisfied, and keep on living in the real world, I beg u to continue the story asap _ *drool over*
Mellory chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Nice start. I'm hoping for more. o
reddoggie chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
what? who is the person kei sees?XO i need to know! you should know who im rooting for! heh, i love Aldred and Kei! i loved reading the manga, wish it kept going, but maybe its better it didnt. im dying to know whatll happen next!QQ
KeikoYosugaraKei's sister chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
I like how your story is going. This manga is awesome, but i'm sad that there's not that many people that read it. I wish there were more stories and I wish the author made it a little bit longer. I love the pairing KeixAl they are just so cute! hope you continue this story soon.
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