|Reviews for What's Meant To Be|
| Henry Anthony Courtler chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Well Lord of Fire, you've done it again. Being able to take characters from a well liked series and putting them in a completely different setting where they will have their struggles and their enjoyments. I really like the plot you have going on so far.
| keplo chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
heh nice one shot but you could make it multichapter :D
| SGXBuster chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
nice one shot...thought it will be more on freestyle? dunno what it's called since your not following the cannon manga or anime wise thought it will be interesting to see it being continued
| SoddenEye unofficial chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Hm that was a really nice story. I think that it would work good as more than a one shot and yet you made it perfect as a one shot. bravo
| Dragonal01 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
You keep writing awesome stories that I have to read. By the way in responce to your question in A Few Angry Words, If you wrote a book with a story that I liked I would probanly buy it
| Cool chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
| Paladin-kriss chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
OOh, college age Moka and Tsukune. I can barely wait
| weixuan18 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Haha, very nice.
| Zehel2010 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Intriguing, unque beginning. Way to go!
Dont forget your other fics! New ideas are good and all but there are at last 4 long unupdated ones.
| Heliosion chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Im not sure where you are headed with this but hey Im curious about it. Good work AGAIN. Damn so short each chapter yet I still come back begging for more. Youll have to tell us your secret one day
| FriedRice84 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
This is a pretty nice, interesting twist to the RV story. It was very good, something I had never really given any thought about - what if Tsukune and Moka met outside the youkai world. The ending was nice and fluffy. This is a nice one-shot, but I'd like to see it develop more...there's some good potential in here.
Keep up the good work!
| Des Morse Morde chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
You know, I actually feel a twinge of envy when I read your stories. Admittedly, I find myself a little jealous of your ability to create such interesting foundation for a story. I always find my stories limited to Yokai academy. I inject creativity, but I've never recreated the world like this. Oh, the use of repetition between the aspects of Moka and Tsukune's high school live was brilliant, and something too few writers do. You miss an occasional word or something here and there, but that is a very minor mistake. Nice job!
| Josawvee chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
awesome start to a story. cant wait to read more of this
| Mike chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
| morbid333 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
I was wondering how that would end. I liked it. It was a little different from what I expected but still good nonetheless.