|Reviews for So She Fell|
| naryga chapter 9 . 7/17/2013
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! You can't write something like that and then just leave us hanging! Ahhhhh at least leave us at a happy place!
Seriously, really good writing! I don't know what has caused you to not have time for this, I mean, life happens and all. I hope you have the time and inclination to finish this someday.
| Awesomegirl chapter 9 . 5/31/2012
Plz do more! I sill want to read the rest!
| Athena Sapphire chapter 9 . 12/19/2011
You gonna finish this? You definitely should, it's extremely well written. I was captivated the entire time and then... it just ended. Very sad. Finish? Please? :)
| Taeniaea chapter 9 . 11/20/2011
| wildcat717 chapter 9 . 2/3/2011
you have done a great job I cant wait for the rest of this. Hope u post more soon
| blackhawk68 chapter 9 . 1/26/2011
This has been great. Like, awesomely awe inspiring. I really can't wait until you update. Which should be soon. Very soon. Please? :D
| SilverShards chapter 9 . 10/25/2010
I can hardly believe i've stayed awake until 1:30 in the morning so that i could finish reading this haha. I love how you've molded the characters and would love to finish this story if you would. I don't see Connan as a Mary Sue, but see her struggling an awful lot. I actually see most of her reactions very realistic. Sure, she goes over the top a few times but who wouldn't? Its a difficult conscept to grasp once you realized that no matter how much of a good person she was, her past life ended up being full of murder, malice, anger and a cold attitude towards everything that moved and breathed. I like how she came so close to slipping back to the dark side before finally ripping herself away, forcefully might I add, and saying "No". I would be terrified facing the idea of being Revan and not sure how honest those around me were being. I do hope you continue this story and that you show us Connan's resolve. Just because she wants to protect those she loves and tries to stay the path of light by no means makes her a Mary Sue. I will patiently await the finale of this story, should you decide to continue. Hopefully, i haven't wasted any of you're time and am hopefully not imposing or anything. I simply am enthralled by the story you have woven and eagerly await whatever you decision you make. Thanks for taking the time to read this and good luck writing you're incredibly detailed, well written and entrancing stories that i now am going to have to read lol, i'll never get any sleep at this rate. -
| 1WiththeButterfly chapter 9 . 3/22/2010
well snap. personality.
I very much approve of this (even though my typical gripe about Revan's name stands. but dont worry, i do that to everyone P ) and i cant wait to see the next chapter,
This the first fic i've seen that uses Jolee as an alternative POV, so props for that.
I'm absolutely loving how Connan is right now. I'm wishing that i actually owned the frakin' game so I could play this awesome.
On a slightly related note, is their any chance you could give me a rundown on the "malak reveals that revan is in fact, revan" Scene? stuff like who's there, whats happened directly before, etc, etc. I wouldn't ask, but I've had a lot of trouble finding these details myself. Its totally fine if you cant, of course.
Anyway, Much props and much anticipation for the next chapter
| Caxz chapter 3 . 3/6/2010
| BlindFury the Ultimate chapter 9 . 3/6/2010
The power of love can overwhelm even the strongest of dark side energies.
Loved this chapter-made me think she was going sith for a sec.
Next chapter is going to be awsome!
| EragonPeep chapter 9 . 3/1/2010
Haha! I finally got around to reading your chapter! Interesting way to describe the dark side of the force in relation to Connan.
Keep up the good work!
| Belisante chapter 9 . 2/28/2010
Cheers, great great great chapter, though cannot wait until she is reunited with Carth.
/Obsessive Carth Fanme/
I'm starting my first chapter on my first star wars fic, hopefully I won't get mega writer's block again.
| Leeirane chapter 9 . 2/28/2010
Oh my, I have waited for this for so long and you didn't let me down. It was brilliant. Carth would always make me stay in the light and Jolee is great friend and mentor. Great chapter, as always.
| Tankred chapter 9 . 2/28/2010
This reminds me a whole lot of how long it's been since I played this game. Personally I felt that they almost completely ruined KotOR 2 by not continuing on the same storyline as the first game, but that might just be me.
Damn Obsidian and their substandard storywriting.
| general-joseph-dickson chapter 9 . 2/27/2010
Nice chapter. looking forward to the next.