|Reviews for Mayonnaise|
| Kittenmommy chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
I just finished reading the novel yesterday, and I have to say I really enjoyed this. It's very reminiscent of the novel, especially the repetitions of phrases ("Tyler goes a little crazy sometimes"). Very nicely done!
| Sir Soz chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
Fucking brilliant story mate, dot care why you do interpret, just something.
| xx chapter 2 . 6/11/2012
It would be cool for you to write about the first guys that witnessed the narrator beating himself up, from the perspective of those dudes. Mayonnaise was great btw!
| Rainbow Cancer chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
i love having a POV from a space monkey. it's refreshing but also brilliant to see this interpretation. love it.
| The Sleeping Creature chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Wow, I loved this! I love how you laid out the scene as it was, not how we read/saw it. Fantastic interpretation and execution. Thanks so much for posting!
| Rocky Samson chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Brilliant interpretation & re-imagining of a very interesting scene.
| Arumei chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
This scene from the movie confused the shit out of me once I rewatched it knowing Tyler and the narrator were the same. You really hit the nail on the head; the scene DOESN'T make sense. But that's okay, because Tyler's right and you don't ask questions.
| GuesssWho chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
We all go a little mad sometimes . . .
| Elephant Parking chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
This is the first fight club fic that Ive read and I have to say, great job. Its really nice to see what the people who aren't in Tyler's head think of the situation and it has a really cool mood to it. :)
| EHWIES chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
This is so good! It's so interesting to see scenes from earlier in the movie revisited knowing the truth about Tyler, and I love the way you approached it here-the repetition that Tyler goes a little crazy sometimes was particularly well done.
| vashsunglasses chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
This is an amazing story. I like the POV of the passengers of the car, how they rationalize Tylar and the Narrator's split personalities. Great job.