|Reviews for Atlas|
| Feen chapter 25 . 8/27
This story is so awesome! Perfect! Exciting! Loving! Wow, thank you, THANK YOU!
| Bamboo Tora chapter 25 . 7/19
Wow. Thank you for the best Star Trek fanfic I have ever read. Your authors notes were as much of a gem as your chapters. I see this has been posted awhile ago and really hope that someone has picked you up for professional writing. Thanks again for all the time you spent on this. It was truely a joy to read.
| sherryfanfic1999 chapter 25 . 3/9
Cool. I like an aggravated Spock. That woman just wouldn't stop poking him with a stick.
| Leirian chapter 25 . 11/25/2019
Thank you for the adventure. I really enjoyed the series.
| fightboredom chapter 5 . 9/14/2019
"preferred sight of the new Vulcan colony"
site not sight
| fightboredom chapter 4 . 9/14/2019
Interesting story so far.
It's hangar not hanger, and cinched not synched (kirk's sweats last chapter).
| snowdancer235 chapter 25 . 7/1/2019
This was the first fic that I read in this fandom, and God, it’s my absolute favorite. This is the fourth time I’ve read it because it’s just pure perfection. I love other Star Trek fics, but I just keep coming back to this one because it hits everything perfectly.
| papillonpan chapter 25 . 6/30/2019
Wow. This is...so good!? I don't know why I've never seen this before!? This fic...cleared my acne. Replenished my bank account. Soothed my soul. Made my dreams a reality. I know this fic is from...ahem...a while ago. But you should know that I read in all in the span of a few hours. Because of reasons. This was just flat out amazing. Idk what I can say that you haven't already heard...but this is the good shit right here.
| GabyStark chapter 7 . 6/29/2019
I love your story so much ! It's so well written and I love how every character is perfectly represented Kirk is surprising everyone and they learn to respect him and not take him for an idiot that just had chance to enter Starfleet Academy. Also I love your explanation between the end of the Nero incident and the day he becomes the youngest Captain of Starfleet history!
I have a little something to add on the Chapter 7 when they speak French. I'm not here to criticize because I love every non-french speaker trying ! So here's a tip for you . The mother speaking with her daughter would use 'tu' all the time because they are close to each other. But she would say 'vous' to Kirk because she doesn't know him and because it would be disrespectful to address him with 'tu' since he is a Captain.
Mother to OpheliaLaisse-moi te regarder. Tu es si pâle. Tu as dû avoir si peur. Est-ce que tu vas bien ?"
Mother to KirkVous êtes un ange".
Otherwise it's an amazing job ! And I love how Kirk is really close to the children because he knows how to make them smile and laugh ! And the crew trying to figure how he is good this good in Russian, French and with kids
| xRae Asakurax chapter 25 . 6/2/2019
This was so good I couldn't put it down all day until I finished it. It was so beautiful and so evocative and I adored every second of it. Thank you for this absolute masterpiece!
| ocean melodies chapter 25 . 3/25/2019
Oh. My heart. This was perfect. The development of the plot, of their relationship, the end of Peters especially! Just. Perfect.
Thank you for this beautiful story.
| ocean melodies chapter 18 . 3/25/2019
The red strings of fate :)
| mtbabe chapter 24 . 1/5/2019
Love this story so much.
| tailysnaily chapter 20 . 12/24/2018
not only is this in the top 5 most amazing fanfics i’ve read since i found fanfiction 10 years ago, this chapter is probably THE most wonderful. i wish i could explain how much i love it. you’re a beautiful writer.
| Superkatze chapter 25 . 11/28/2018
I am so glad I stumbled upon your story! Thank you for sharing your talent!