Reviews for Wrong
XxXsOuLxXx chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
awww, i daww'ed. it was a really cute fic. i hope that you can write more cute ones with these two again!
applepie1989 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
I like it : The questions and the answers guts raised and gave made it a beautiful piece.
Hohenheim x3 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
wou ... it's good... u're writing style is god too...

por si entiendes espaƱol: me encanto la comparacion, nunca me lo habia planteado asi, pero suena a pensmientos que son capaces de enremezclarse en la cabeza de guts, en verdad lo disfrute.
VerbogenVerwogen chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
I know this is a very late review (but I just came across the fic now) and it's good. The writing style is a bit unusual perhaps, but I like how you present Guts' conflicted feelings. I think it's realistic that he'd think back to Donovan and what he'd done to him; it's hinted at in early canon when he refuses to let anyone touch him.

The piece is a bit heart-breaking too because you present Guts unwavering trust in Griffith so well without ignoring the fact that he doesn't want to be used by anyone (do I sound coherent? I hope).

Eh, fail review but I did like this 3.