Reviews for Dance Lessons
kokihi chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
That was adorable. Well done!
Hawki chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
-Like the writing style. It fits Jeyne’s POV. River’s dialogue fits her character also.

-Premise…well, nitpicking, but while part of the plan was for Kaylee to go in with the dress, there was nothing to say that she had to dance as part of the bargin (that I can recall at least). Anyway, it’s the premise, so no harm, no foul.

-All in all, good job. Despite the focus on Jeyne and Kaylee, I enjoyed the characterization of River the most. I imagine she can be a difficult character to right for, but here, it was done very well.
Illusion of the Mirror chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Wow. Just wow. This was totally great. Instant fave.
Dherea chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Very kind of Jayne to help a woman in distress...also opened River's eyes to another side of Jayne. Shiny!
ebfiddler chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Nice story. I love the idea that Jayne really knows how to dance. There's more to Jayne than meets the eye, isn't there? ""Ya don't wanna be laughed at, and ya don't want Mal to be let down"-he's insightful, too. Enjoyed your mislead, with Jayne thinking that Simon wasn't doing right by Kaylee at the beginning. So Jayne's mother insisted that he learn to dance, eh? I would love to hear more of your take on Jayne's background. Liked your characterization of River, and particularly the enjoyed the lucid moment in which she said "Don't be ridiculous." I can see it.
LovelyLytton chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
This is hands down one of my very favourite Firefly fics.
shiny silver grl chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
Another winner! Great little ficlet, once again embodied by perfect dialogue. You've got a real knack for it. And that final paragraph from River's POV has a very lovely quality to it. Thanks again :)
Dimac99 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Aww, this one's really sweet. I liked that Jayne maybe had feelings a bit deeper for Kaylee than just wanting to *sex her* and it makes him a bit more protective of her than he might otherwise be. It also explains his dislike of Simon. I think Simon would probably not have been able to avoid learning at least some dancing as he grew up - it's more plausible that he simply has two left feet, but that's a fairly minor detail and didn't make the story any less enjoyable. I liked the little end scene from River's pov and I think you did her crazy-to-sane-to-crazy voice very well.
lifeislikeaboxofbertiebotts chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
So I just wanted to tell you this was amazing! Jaylee are so cute! & River! Great job :)
Renegade.Girl13 chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
This was a really great story, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You captured the characters quite well, as well as getting the dialogue pretty true to character. Awesome job!
Enda7lex chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
I loved this story. You've captured the characters so well.

You have a gift. Write more. xxx
Emily chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Captain is victorious; he's captured the pink frills!

I'm still laughing... :'D
goldennight16 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
I know this is late, but I really liked this story :) Very cute!
MissGuenever chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Awww... I loved this. The sweeter side of Jayne; but, still keeping the rough edges.
Thescarredman chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Aww. A River/Jayne/Kaylee triangle, and a chance to learn something new and unexpected about Jayne, besides. Love it.
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