|Reviews for Saying Goodbye|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
the bit about Hermione at the end kills the whole thing
| X2X chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Would of been perfect if you would of left out the Hermione and H/Hr part. That really ruined it.
| KJL chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I loved it! Especially the parts about Harry/Hermione, I've always thought of them in a sort of similar manner. They were SO close.
Just one thing, there was one paragraph where you used "in earnest" like four times. Which is just a little bit much.
Otherwise, it was great!
| Cybergades chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Over all a well written lemon. My only beef with it is one of personal preference then of quality. I'm a diehard H/G fan and the H/Hr overtones really turned me off. That said, it certianly accomplished what you set out to do, so good job.
| Conman2 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Wow. Definitely well written. One of the best lemons I've read. If not THE best.
| fantasyra chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Nice, I especialy liked that Harmoney in the back of his mind with a parting of the ways between the cannon couples being done, not in hate but in understanding. I dont see that alot from the fics I have read. Well done and enjoyable.
| Melora chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:
w w w . geocities sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)
It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.
Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Melora Brockert, SUM student