Reviews for Only When They're Gone
BelleWolf chapter 30 . 12/10/2016
Really enjoyed your writing. Great plot twists! Had to read the entire story very quickly as it was hard to put down.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/20/2016
Too soon for his dick in her vagina.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/20/2016
If he had wanted that to be a "happy moment" for her, why didn't he INVITE her instead of ordering her around like a hated dog? Eric lies to himself a lot.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/20/2016
So Eric is a tyrant. Great.
AZSeaOtter chapter 30 . 7/7/2016
Great story with an excellent ending! Loved the roller coaster ride of excitement! Thank you so much for sharing your story!
Guest chapter 30 . 3/29/2016
MiniLover chapter 30 . 7/20/2015
Loved it! Amazingly written! Loved your in-depth analysis of your characters and your unique observations into why they act and react the way they do. Awesome!
lustofavampire chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
tanseynz chapter 30 . 11/9/2014
Rollercoaster! That's all I have to say about that. :-)
tanseynz chapter 29 . 11/9/2014
Yep, that'll be a catalyst event. Wake up Sookie.
tanseynz chapter 27 . 11/9/2014
Eric and Sookie separated is always when trouble happens. Why don't they remember that? Victor is very canny!
tanseynz chapter 26 . 11/9/2014
Considering all the assumptions she makes, it's illogical for her to give herself completely to Eric. She lies to herself continually in order to increase her own sense of self-worthlessness, so lying to Eric is only another short step. Then, when she lets him down again, the whole cycle begins again.
You truly need to give her a catalyst event to break that because his request above is not powerful enough, imo.
tanseynz chapter 25 . 11/9/2014
She genuinely needs to let go of her insecurities. The immature 'tossing me out like garbage' idea is in direct opposite to his present actions, and until they've actually talked rather than as usual, skirted around the issues then fucked like rabbits, they can't move forwards in any meaningful way.
I get that for them sex is usually an expression of what they can't say out loud to each other but c'mon, over 1000 years Eric MUST have learned it's the unsaid things that always trip you up!
tanseynz chapter 24 . 11/9/2014
Imo the best chapter of this entire story. Both of them are suffering their own share of realistic misunderstandings this time, plus affected still by what they went through for so long. Their anger at each other is completely understandable.
tanseynz chapter 22 . 11/9/2014
Ugh, I hate when anything describing Sookie is written as 'tiny'. She's not tiny, and neither are her hands. True Blood did us all a disservice by using a small actress as Sookie rather than one with the physical description CH used in her books.
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