Okay, I like this book.
But I also think that sleeping together while still otherwise engaged was kinda shitty of them.
I know I should feel bad for them, cause of how controlling Edward is to Bella, and how Alice never fully accepted Jasper, but I think that's just not enough to justify cheating (for me).
I also really hope this doesn't mean they jump head first into being in a relationship and in love as if they have been together for years, because they still need to get to know each other.
As people, and as each other's new partner.
Excited to see what happens next!

So cute…. Then the confederate uniform at the wedding. Whyyyyy

one thing I'm curious about is, in your outtake on Bella's change, Edward can still read her mind. Does that mean she doesn't have her "normal" gift? Or can he read her mind because she's no longer wishes to keep him out? it's the only unanswered question I have from your story. I know that Bella's gifts vary from story to story but I don't think I've ever read one where she has no gift.

really enjoyed your story. I have it marked as a favorite, but I didn't see where I reviewed it before. after reading it I don't believe that I had read it before. I'm glad I came across it. Thank you for sharing this story.

Bella wouldn't be good insane if she just told Edward in the time frame that Alice said. That night she should have told him!

I can't stand her, she's so childish, needy and can't even think for herself. Everybody coddled her way too much. It's sickening.

how many times do they have to do this over and over again? how may times to say "sorry"? it's getting to be to much! Alice and Edward need to back off. sure they are hurt but all this rigamarole is helping. everyone just shut up and go to neutral corners god god sake!

Edward is such a child, not wanting Jasper to take his toy away, and Alice is almost as bad.

wow!

Love it

Bc it was o.s. I see how this developed curious hw it will turn out

Quiero otra historia de Jazper y Bella, los describes tan bien y son una pareja adorable.

such an awesome story and I love how different ur story line went thanks for sharing

Why oh why I want them together already;)

Awesome second chapter