I liked this story. Probably not as much as the others since now I feel completely bad for Edward (and that is hard because I'm not a big Edward fan) but still this was a great story about Bella and Jasper.

Again, you astound me with the creativity and realism you bring to your stories. This pairing was wonderful and I appreciated the way you had them deal with the fact that they "cheated" on their signifigant others. Normally I don't like a story when that is the case, but the way you handled it in here was weel worth the tiny bit of discomfort I felt at first. Thank you for sharing this. You are quickly becoming a favorite author of mine. I'm off to start your trilogy this evening, right after I do the beta work I was supposed to be doing instead of reading this- LOL!

~Sassy

this is totally random, buti thought you deserve to know that it was this epic story, YOUR story, that got me hooked to fanfic in the first place (roughly a year ago).

so i just wanted to thank you for writing it. otherwise i wouldn't be reading (& writing) all the other great stories on this site that i've come to love.

so thank ya!

Thank you for another brilliant jasper/bella story. They are my favourite paring and you always write them so well. This was no exception!

Good luck with future fics!

xxx

Ohhhh, Wowwww...another really satisfying JAS & Bella story.

As always, thank you for your attention to language, spelling, sentence structure, etc, those basics (of which so many today are ignorant) make the reading so much more enjoyable.

Best,

Ann in SC

What an absolutely wonderful story. I always enjoy how you write Jasper and Bella. And your Jasper's are always so...unf...utterly dreamy. This one was no exception. Thanks for sharing.

WOW! Just, wow! Was a dedicated Jake/Bells fan, but I've now opened my eyes & heart to Jasper/Bella also. Amazing story!

wonderful. i didnt get to read the outtake. i have been busy writing. but writers block is a sufference we all go through. so i went back in to what i have not caught up on in some time. great ending by the way.

thanks for a great story :)

love it

xoxoxoxo

;)

I loved this story

Damn, that didn't exactly go well. Wonderful chapter :)

Oooh, naughty Alice!

wonderful story had so much fun reading it

stIll a little sad for Edward though

thanks for this little gem '

regards lin

Thank you so much for the gentle sweet journey, I know it was a trial for you write, and I could also tell you wrote from the heart and those are the very best journeys to share with your readers...with each one you write you share a bit of your heat, I am happy to have to be able to have shared this with you.

Yes I am a lurker, I don't review until the end of the story..just the way I am...:)