|Reviews for Final Battles|
| Can't make a name chapter 16 . 3/12
I really love your writing. I was thinking of posting a story but now; wow you are so good. Can't wait to read the next story.
Angie is my favorite. I even had a dream she was working at my company and was a member of the 5th Column still and I was helping her with a select statement. Now that is funny.
Finding out how Todd was killed was so sad. He was likely stronger than anyone including the Resistance.
Nice to see Robert reach out to Willie. Also I really loved the idea of him kind of forgetting to do his Willie thing and speak English perfectly. I like it to come out but like it when he speaks Willie speak.
Again you write really interesting stories and included things I was thinking or had made into part of a story I was writing. Keep it up!
| Can't make a name chapter 13 . 3/8
No way Todd was killed? Had a feeling though when she would not let him join and it seemed like she knew it would happen. Wonder how it goes for Angie?
I have to say I do like Angie. Then again I have pager this week and got paged early on a Saturday morning when someone's server went down.
Also I liked that they did have security and were monitoring. I wondered how she was able to do this I work for a software company which has been around longer than V and was already into security that sounded tighter than the Visitors. So yeah I liked she got caught.
Oh loved Willie speaking perfect English. I was thinking of writing a fan fiction. Started it and it has Willie getting some help with learning English and in the end encouraged to use his imperfect English to give him time to regroup and think when needed. After all Youth Leaders were great at manipulating. Not sure I will ever write it though, but it sounds like I am not the first to think it up or something like it :)
Good job; three more chapters to go
| Can't make a name chapter 5 . 3/6
Liked what Ham says: ...would-be master race they sure are sloppy with security...
I agree; funny for a people that know there are more than just themselves in the universe you would think they would take more care with programs. Encryption of programs and files; masking of data ever changing codes
Also the Visitors have to learn to use their technology but humans pretty much seem to be able to do anything. That was something in the mini-series watching Mike Donovan fly their craft effortlessly.
Done with ranting
Your story is totally awesome. Can't wait to read the next 11 chapters
| aloysia piton chapter 16 . 8/29/2010
Wow! I've really liked the speech of Martin...he is really true, humans can't understand that the one of the Fifth Column risk their life for them! Poor Todd...
I also liked the last part with Tyler and Angie...they're too great together :)!
I can't wait for your next ff :)...
| Lila chapter 16 . 8/27/2010
If Icould do handsprings I would! I've loved this from the start and you have not disappointed me with this chapter, Javanyet. Thank you for a true to character portrayal of Ham, that doesn't lose one bit of his attitude, even when he's vulnerable.
| mrskaz chapter 16 . 8/26/2010
You did it again...
Another great chapter..
Loved Tyler/Angie convo...as always...
Can't wait to see what happens next...,
Hope you have many, many more stories in you...because I love reading them.
| MissMelysse chapter 16 . 8/25/2010
I love Angie to bits and really enjoyed this updste. The scene with Martin was brilliantly written. I'd gush more, but
I'm dealing with a killer migraine.
| mrskaz chapter 15 . 8/20/2010
Hope you update soon...
Love Tyler/Angie relationship...I always thought they should have given Tyler a love on the show..shame they didn't..
I've become hooked on this story, can't wait to see what happens next...
| mrskaz chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Please update soon...
I'm hooked on this story and love the relationship btw Ham/Angie...
Can't wait for an update...soon I hope..LOL
| aloysia piton chapter 15 . 8/1/2010
I liked this chapter...you're always too good in writing!
I love the relationship between Tyler and Angie, they are good together :)...and then I liked really, really much the last part, when Robert invites Willie to sleep with them... it's right..he has done really much to help them in the war, he deserves it :)1
I looking forward the next chapter now :)...bye, Ila!
| MissMelysse chapter 15 . 7/30/2010
I'm so sorry I've been so absent, from writing, from reading, from reviewing. Wish I could say something wonderful had happened, but this summer has been...fair to middling at best.
This chapter, however, kicked ass. And the previous one as well.
I wish I had something more constructive to add, but I'm wiped out, and have a gig in the morning.
Know that I AM still reading and enjoying, at least.
| aloysia piton chapter 14 . 7/11/2010
I'm happy you hsve not decide to let this ff down...this chapter is kind of sad but good just the same.. I like your way of writing and I'm really curious about next events :)!
| sunfire004 chapter 14 . 6/12/2010
I was so ectstatisc to see this story updated! please dont make me wait so long for the next chapter!
| aloysia piton chapter 13 . 3/23/2010
Oh, poor Todd!
I hoped he could manage through it! I'm sad...I was starting to actually like him!
| sunfire004 chapter 12 . 3/22/2010
My cell phone refuses to open fanfiction, but since I added you to my story alert it will open that that chapter but refuses to let me leave a comment!grgr now i am in a shady coffeehouse typing this.. i just love this story.. i think your portrayal of ham tyler is dead on and angie is a worthy woman for him in my opinion...cant wait to read more!