Reviews for Inevitable
guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2016
premise was fine, writing style and pacing good, no spelling/grammar errors. just one problem, but it's pretty huge: the 'voice' of the characters. the dialogue...it sounded nothing like them.
ritzkiaprilia chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
Wow, this is awesome XD loved it!
hogride chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
Sequel sequel sequel
Indomitos Instinctu chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Fan-frigging-tastic. Gave me goosebumps :D
InfiniteMystery chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
hehe, nice story! love it!
Random Peep chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Hee Hee loved it! Awesome job! P
Madhatterak chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
The dichotomy here is awesome. It's not till the very end that you can figure out who is who. I love it.
Teresa Kaiju chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Unusually deep and well written story. A pleasure to read! Thanks!
Citrus Fever chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Very nice!
Leandros87 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Aww, this is soo sweet. Will you make a sequel? please? _
Sin Like U Mean It chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
OMG OMG OMG I LOVE IT! lol you should so write more
eoraptor chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
It's a little bit heavy on the metaphor and seems a bit one sided right up until the last bit where she manages to turn it on the theif; but I think you managed to get the themes across well.
iceonthewing chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
wow you did a great job with the complex relationship of these two. i love 'em!
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Well, well, soldier...

(Whistles) Now, THIS was interesting!

Pretty deep, I'd say.

I couldn't for the life of me figure out who was who! LOL

Every word was wisely chosen.

And then, to seal it all, a li'l kiss.

Nice, very nice work, marine.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Daryl chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
this story is so sweet
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