Reviews for Bedtime Story
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Hahhaha my god everything was funny when he screamed at himself in his mind lol.
Darthjester13 chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Great story very funny
Logic-is-overrated chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
HAHA XD laughed so much at the "not getting any" part XD this was so AWESOME!
yume76 chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
omg. this was positively hilarious. nice work.
Summer night love chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
hahaha very funny. really good job
thisaccounthasbeencancelled1 chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
lol! this really was good! very funny!
GinTonic chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Hey dragongirl,

Not bad, not bad at all! Renji sarcasm was spot on.
Red One1223 chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
BWHAHAHAHAHA! I loved it! I freaking loved it and though there were some parts that got me confused because it went from third person to first person several times, but other than that I knew what was going on! Poor Renji at the end though XD
amekage chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
this is so great. some of the things in his story did sound like something i have read in a fanfic.

Miss Kitty DeMarco chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
lmao... I love this! It's so funny! You might want to go through and fix it a bit, though. You kept switching between first-person and third-person narrative, which got a little confusing. I'm sorry to hear about your great-aunt, but glad that writing this helped. Writing can truly be cathartic! :)
MyMusesSpeakToMe chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I have been Renji. Children (and imature Soul Reapers) can be so cruel.
froststripe chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
* Ok, I'm off the floor now! That was hilarious! That is definitely something Renji would tell. Good job at capturing him in character! I love him! Good Job!
xxXAngel of InsanityXxx chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
h-ho;y c-cra[... hahahahahahahahaha
LilNeko-Chan1313 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Lol, stick-up-the-ass syndrome XD Hahaha!

Good story :) And Happy Birthday Renji! Nice to finally share a bday with someone bad ass :-P
Fried chicken chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
what a kind of story...but with Rangiku and the others...How can it by a suitable story for kids anyways?

What Byakuya will do to Renji...I wonder...

And it's true that bad fanfic often sounds like that...

Anyways good story, hope you will write another one soon...
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