|Reviews for Begin to See|
| miaokuancha chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Oh my God this is gorgeous! And poignant, too. I LOVE it. Just love it.
| mave88 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
I loved it.
| JeNnNn chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
o0o0o. you wrote this in 30minutes?
niice. if i did that with my story, it would just be useless drabble! hehe
interesting insight into j/a first meeting :D
| ME LOVEY JAZZY chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Wow, that was EXTREMELY well written! The wording is just so captivating. I love it!
| DaniWerner chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
I really liked this. It was a little glimpse into Alice's origins (well, not human origins, but where she came from before she and Jasper joined the Cullen family).
| Beans827 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Oh, that was beautiful. Great interpretation of the sense of sight! Alice's is purely unique! Great job!
| Justine Lark chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it.
| Littlechoo chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
I love how you write, always showing, never telling. You write like you're painting a picture, the more you look the more you see.
Good luck with the contest :)