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miaokuancha chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Oh my God this is gorgeous! And poignant, too. I LOVE it. Just love it.
mave88 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
So sweet!

I loved it.
JeNnNn chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
o0o0o. you wrote this in 30minutes?

niice. if i did that with my story, it would just be useless drabble! hehe

interesting insight into j/a first meeting :D

-jenn
ME LOVEY JAZZY chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Wow, that was EXTREMELY well written! The wording is just so captivating. I love it!
munchkn chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
I really liked this. It was a little glimpse into Alice's origins (well, not human origins, but where she came from before she and Jasper joined the Cullen family).
Beans827 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Oh, that was beautiful. Great interpretation of the sense of sight! Alice's is purely unique! Great job!
Justine Lark chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it.
Littlechoo chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
I love how you write, always showing, never telling. You write like you're painting a picture, the more you look the more you see.

Good luck with the contest :)