Reviews for Watermelon War
Failure Turtle chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
IS KAIT CREEPIN' ON RANDY?

omg we're all creepin' on randy

wait do all of even think randy is hot in real life? i think so.

AHH TISTA RAPE

LOOK AT THIS MUFFIN TOP

WELL MAYBE JAY SHOULD TAKE CARE OF KAIT'S CAT IF YOU KNOW WHAT I'M SAYIN

oh dear lord...
Sunny's Priceless Dream chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
The summary had me laughing before I even read it.

It wouldn't surprise me if Chris was gay.

Or Cody.

This was hilarious. I loved the watermelon war!

Great job!
Thee Britty chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Haha. This is funny. Of course they're all ogling Randy! Who in their right mind WOULDN'T ogle Randy?

I just don't understand how some girls don't find him hot. They must not look at him in the right way. Silly girls.

I'd want to like..rape him or something. :D

But then again, you can't rape the willing.

Haha. And Randy would be VERY willing.

:D

This is pretty funny :).

Lubs, Y
Pandora's Cube chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Ok, so I've had a really bad and this story made me smile.

Too funny
Esha Napoleon chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
LOVE IT!
CrystalxShip chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
TWHAT

oh god randal!

oh,so my gay brother is the genius

chris is an eyeful,minus the balding,glitter,trunks,and fat

ah h h it is so hot when Randal says 'ladies'

hahaha chris is ghey

damn fucking straight im in randy's lap

WATERMELON OH GOD!

jericho should just sing everything

jay does have a big ass head

YES RANDAL EAT IT!
TJ Sparkles chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I don't know why you thought I'd be disappointed.

This was hilarious.

The thought of Christian running around with a watermelon on his face amused me so.

And the reaction to Randy (“Which one of you broads got the goods?” “ME!”) was too freaking funny.

I would so ogle Chris. LOL. I thought the end was funny..I mean, I'm sure you're gonna get a lot of reviews about whether or not Chris is gay.

Great job, Mack.

Tina