Reviews for She Wouldn't Give Up on Me
IronQueen chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
You captured Paula and Steven very well, it felt like a real "outtake" scene from the episode.

If anyone wants to know how the following series were meant to pan out, before the show got cancelled, check out this link, it's an interview with show creator James Parriot and he reveals the vast majority of his future plot lines for season 2 and the rest of the series.


Could start some story ideas on here on , no?
Purpleyin chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
I was hoping there'd be some fic for these two and happy to see it. Nice little peice in addition to the events of the ep.
gribbs chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
That was good. It was interesting to read his thoughts & to see how you got all the subtlties of their relationhip in here - well done!

I like the idea of Donner's thoughts and responses during this episode, would be really complex - a bit of a challenge!

Keep up the good work

casey.d chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
i just wanted to let you know that your story was really great. i'm so happy to see some defying gravity fanfic up here (and my favourite pairing on the show ]). the friendship/tension between the two is great on the show, and you managed to capture wass' thoughts really well. great job and i look forward to reading more from you!
Noc and NC chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Wow! What a great start to the Defying Gravity section! StevexPaula is probably my favorite pairing possibility of the bunch, so reading this fic made me really happy . I just love the way they interact on the show, and you did an amazing job capturing that!
Swamp Fairy chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
AW! loved this SO SO SO much! completely adorable. very realistic, especially the dialouge. it's really sad that you're the only one writing here! ill joinn you soon, don't worry :-) this is SUCH a great show! paulaxsteven is my favorite couple. and this was an amazing story! MORE PLEASE! I DEMAND IT!
betty chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
great story! i hope you have some more wass/paula stories coming
AnnaM chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Well done. Nice touch adding in the commonality of their love of dogs. Not sure I agree about Steven's religious beliefs, but hey, it works great for your fic.

Love the last few lines. Great job!
tripwatcher2 chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
This was terrific! I like Wass's POV here. His character is really...different? I loved his intense effort to save her thumb and the reasons for it! Between this and the whole spit inside the suit to stop the leak, not to mention the encrypted porn, Wass is quickly becoming one of my favorites! LOL! Thanks for getting the Defying Gravity fan fiction started. I hope there is much more to come!
animeme220 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
WHAT? There's only one story for this *awesome* series?

Anyway, I love what you did with the story! I just watched the episode, and I couldn't help thinking "Are they out to have Paula killed by Wass? It's the second time he's done something to injure her!" But you have to love their growing relationship. Amazing job with the story!
robertsmithseeker chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
This story rocks loved it. It caught the feel of the charcters and the show to a tee. Keep up the good work and

i'll keep reading um.
TheDoc811 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Congrats on the first Defying Gravity fic, and it's well-written too.

Until next time,

me chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
hey, just wanted to tell you i really enjoyed this fist foray into the defying gravity category. the interaction between wass and paula is pretty cute, and i think you nailed his feelings-and his inability to articulate them. keep up the good work; i'm looking forward to reading your take on donner's thoughts.
cm21 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
This is an awesome story - I think it really fits with Steven's character in Bacon. It's nice to see some fanfiction of his thoughts since we don't seem to see as much of his character on the show as a few others.
Starman3569 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Nice story!

Now if the show would continue past 13 eps, that would be awesome, but it's looking like a member of the walking dead now :(