|Reviews for Slouching Towards Bethlehem|
| browner864 chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
I'm 100 percent in love with this story. Nothing else I've read has come close and even though this is going to be one heck of a roller coaster, I'm excited to take the ride! I'm about in tears after these first two chapters and I can't imagine how much more sad it will get. But it's very well written and I'm enjoying it so much! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| VENZwife chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
Oh my...what a heartbreaking situation for Parker and the whole family! There is nothing worse than when a loved one is facing a life or death situation. It is such a scary and emotional time!
Thank you for writing this story! I am really enjoying it, and can't wait for the next parts.
| iamladyliberty chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
beautiful father son, blended family interaction. i love how much parker figures out on his own. i love how bones tries so hard not to lie. it's all very real feeling.
thanks for wriiting!
| TerriP chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
This story is really wonderful. You are a great writer, and I can't wait for more!
| Vengeful chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
I love the dynamics that you have created! While I've never considered Booth and Bones in those particular positions, I find your explanation for why they are where they are very convincing. Their characteristics, too, seem rather in character-especially Brennan's. Again, that's something that is lacking in family stories in this fandom, and it always makes me happy to see it all.
I always did like Rebecca, and I'm sorry to see her story turn out so badly, but this is an unique idea (unless I've just been gone to long from the Bones fandom), and I really look forward to seeing how it changes the happy dynamic of the family.
Keep up the good work!
| NerdGurl89 chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
Wow, this is great! I don't like most future-fics, but this is awesome! Update soon, I wanna know what happens!
| iamladyliberty chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
woah... super heavy but very well done. i'll be really interested to see where you take this, if we will be living through rebecca's death or instead watching it's aftermath. very powerful stuff, please keep going.
thanks for writing!
| corik80 chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
Great chapter! It's awesome how you have managed to catch all the differing emotions and make them seem real. Love it and can't wait for more!
| corik80 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Great start! I loved it! Can't wait for more!
| Vengeful chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
It's been a long time since I last reviewed anything, but this has left me feeling very much interested. I love the initial premise of this-Booth and Bones together, but their world shaken up. I can't wait to see how they deal with this, what their life together entails, etc. This looks very promising, and I do hope that you're better at managing your time than I when it comes to writing :)
Keep up the good work.
| ki1ki1 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
| burninganchors chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Oh, that was wonderfully heart-wrenching. You captured the shocked, disbelieving angst so perfectly that I'm over here reaching for the tissues.
The way Brennan reached out to Parker was very her, yet there was a new element in her personality that probably came before this point in the story. I'd love to see that explored, as well as what does happen in this future of theirs.
I'm very eager for more. Good luck in getting updates in with everything else you have going on haha :]
| French Chipmunk chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Ooh, you have me intrigued with this story. I look forward to the update.
| faha2 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
oh...looking good :)