Reviews for The Waiting Game
snow eopard chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
o h my gosh that was actually really funny
LG chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
I definitely should not like this story as much as I do, but your Jacob is so freaking perfect! His mix of cockiness, adorableness, humour and perviness is spot-on. I'd think you were a 16 year-old boy if I didn't know better.

How are you not a published author? Everything you write is pure magic.
jharv241 chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Excellent funny one shot!
Jeri252 chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
love it
pineapplelobstersauce chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
this wasso great! fun to read and realitic too :D u rock!
cc chapter 1 . 7/3/2011

Daintress chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Uh oh. But Alice SHOULD be able to see what Bella's doing, even if she can't tell who she's on the phone with, right? ;) Lol! This could get ugly. Very cute one-shot!
crazysmile15 chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Don't leave us hanging Bella! lol!
tinynmia chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Hehehe Jacobs a cunning boy lol that was great lol u had me laughing and grinning the whole time.
Rose Hathaway9 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
that was funny, hahahaha
MutantSquirrel chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Awesome story! Had me grinning all the way through.
purelyamuse chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
This was so stinking cute. You're Jacob is perfectly in character. Thank you!
badooshe101 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
U NEED TO WRITE MORE! good job i like it.. the suspense is killing me! email me when you finish the next chapter!

i-kno-you-want-me chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
that was awkward i think?
sweetheart357 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
You should put a second chapter in with a lemon. That was amazing!
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