|Reviews for Scream|
| figliedellatempesta chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
:D yay, awesome. I wrote a really similar story to this a little while ago, but I love yours too. I love the idea of Mayuri experimenting on Szayel, and I love how cold and scientific he is. Szayel and Mayuri are 2 of my fave characters and you've done a good job of depicting them. And the last line is great, haha.
| Sassy Lil Scorpio chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
This was really great and well written. I like the premise of it, and as you mentioned in your author's notes...Szayel was immobile-and it makes perfect sense that Mayuri would want to use him as a test subject, especially to learn more about the Espada. Great dialogue and description! I especially love how you describe the sword entering Syzayel's body. So creepy! And I can definitely hear Mayuri's voice in this. Love how Mayuri taunts him and then finally gets the scream from Szayel anticipated. The ending was great too. Awesome work!
| Solo Loco Ellingson-Rose chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
D'awesome~! I love "A Moment in the Life of..." fics, and I think that this one qualifies. It isn't super long, but it isn't super short either. It ends at just the right spot, and it makes me happy.
And I totally agree with you.
| Aquamarine Columbine chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Whoa...oh, the irony, it burns...
That was very interesting to read - I have to admit I pity Szayel. *winces* Nice job though...that must be some /very/ strong glass!
| KSFWolfe chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
I liked that...a sort of neat balance between eerie and humourous. Kudos for the referance to Kenpatchi, too
I had anesthesia once for surgery, and I remember how eveyrhting was swimming when i came to. You described it really well! Nice job!
| the maiden of the black moon chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
do more please