|Reviews for Ambiguous and Defined|
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/20
Nice story.. Enjoyed reading.. Thanks author-san!
| levi97100 chapter 10 . 12/6/2014
This was A very good story I think you got everybody down XD I love how you made mentions to Shizuru's insanity like how she was starting to wonder I really liked that nobody likes to make even the smallest hint of Shizuru beings Psycho I really like dark Shizuru and I like how you showed A little bit of that, Also I like the overall angst the dark under tone of the story made it very fun to read with A realist feel to it but not so real that I feel like shit after reading :) My biggest problem is that only in the latter chapter did you use Shizuru's saying the "Ara." thing she does when ever she has her mask up, and when you did use it you only use it at most 2 - 3 times in A chapter :( But it was still really good,
I am going to rate it from (1-10) I'll give this story A (8.5 - 10) Really good and enjoyable.
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/1/2012
| BrokenPathway chapter 10 . 3/5/2012
I am glad that I stumbled upon this story. It was quite well written. I like how you put both the perspective of shizuru and natsuki into it. Great work :D
| sarahnmf chapter 10 . 1/25/2012
It's a great fan fiction, I could really imagine as this is what happened after the HiME festival!
| jo-Kaon17 chapter 10 . 12/26/2011
thank you...i love every story you wrote that ive read so far...,i truly enjoy them...thanks for sharing :)
| jo-Kaon17 chapter 3 . 12/25/2011
ooOOwwooWOW...this is a great chapter., i just hate the selfishness of Natsuki because she never consider Shizuru feeling..but also like the way their conversation goes..,
| IamNil chapter 8 . 12/3/2011
Well, quite a lovely... uhh, sad story. And finally, I realized while reading and from my last review on s&b, yeah... it's the angst that shook my soul, not the cold, hahaha.
I am leaving a review here because I spotted quite a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes in your story... but well, the story is a little too long, and too hard to read all at once while still remembering the mistakes. I find it difficult to pinpoint all of the mistakes, but I guess I'll just skip it and forget it xD
Unless o.o you really do want to know...
Well, blah~ whatever, nice story. Keep it up and write more... but I do hope they could be less angsty, somehow (Noticed that much of your stories are angst, lol. Actually, not quite, but the level of angst in each story is way too strong for me. I'm not saying that it's not good, but I'm just a sensitive person . And please don't ask me not to read your stories just because I am sensitive, it would kill me :p
Ugh... I think I'm digging a hole. And I would stop my ranting now. Sorry 'bout that (oppss)
| ShadowCub chapter 10 . 2/28/2011
Love is good!
| obsessedwithshiznat chapter 9 . 2/11/2011
Beautiful! Just beautiful! The story was too perfect, I was afraid that there would be a really bad twist in the end. I was at the edge of my seat the whole time. I'm very impressed!
Although I would have wanted another chapter, focusing on shiznat and their new relationship, I think your ending was awesome too! The almost-kiss scene at the end was too cute and sweet, I think it even made me blush.
I'm so happy to add this to my favorites and will gladly re-read the story all over again.
| devilhamster chapter 10 . 11/19/2010
wow even though at the beginning there was so much angst which i cry over a lot but i am glad that shizuru and natsuki finally gotten their happy ending. thanks for such a wonderful story.
| PhantomBlaze chapter 10 . 10/23/2010
This is a hauntingly beautiful fic. It is emotional and moving. Bitter-sweet yet very enjoyable. The pace may be tortuously slow and a tad angsty at times, but I believe you reflected rather human and realistic emotions and uncertainties.
Aside from times where the perspectives are a bit confusing to read, I really have no complaints.
You are a commendable and exceptional writer. Keep up the good work.
| bubble.duckie chapter 6 . 10/18/2010
I dob't know about others but i really like this fic! I hope the ending will be happy :D
| bubble.duckie chapter 5 . 10/17/2010
I just love the amount of drama in this chapter! I just got confused in some parts where I dony know whos saying what. I literally had to struggle there! Nevertheless i still love it!
| bubble.duckie chapter 4 . 10/17/2010
Oh my god! I really like how you built the atmosphere in this chapter! Now, i can empathize with how they both are feelin!