This is a great fanfiction I like the setting and you characterization. Please continue with this plot I'd really like to know where is goes.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha this is going to be priceless

A lot of promise in this, I can't wait to see more.

really cool

Will u ever finish this story?

I have to say that reading your work makes me want to go back to writing. This story was very captivating, I could literally see the movie unfolding in my mind. I would absoluetly love to see more chapters and see where these characters are headed. Your Victor was spot-on! I loved the first chapter as Kitty follows Victor through the woods, the birds flying out to sea, the breeze through the trees and Victor's shrap blue eyes. Very nice .

Please please write more!

I love it! Well done!

that was awesome plz plz update

You should keep going with this, it is really good!

Oh god, another wonderful chapter. Really good. I can't wait to read the next one. Please keep it up and don't let me wait to long. Thanks

Dear Gods - gimme more ;-) Just go ahead!

Good story but please stop the random japanese. it's really tedious to go the bottom of the page to figure out what they're saying and getting back up to your original spot without accidentally reading the end of the chapter first.

This is a great story so far, can't wait to read more! This is a different side of Victor, and Logan and Marie seem very believable..

stupid button, stupid "wait 15 seconds" what i meant to say was... YEY! somebody has started to write a kitty and sabertooth, there are not enough of them around. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D