Reviews for Unspoiled |
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![]() ![]() Feel almost like Kagome by commenting; reaching through time! I read this story years ago as it was being written and shared. I've been going through all of your stories again and find them just as delightful now as then. Your Sesshomaru's are still some of my very favorite characters! Hope you're doing well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I didn't want this story to end, it's so good and well written. I seem to re-read it ever so often. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww sooo cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhhh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hummmmmmm interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the progression and detail of your story . Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an incredible fiction, with plenty of loops in time without there being a single paradox. This wasn't easy ! And young Sesshomaru was adorable. As for him making a ring out of his baby fangs... so very cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() This broke my heart |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sesshomaru acting like a child is such a delight, I really adore this piece. I can almost see my seven years old son jumping into puddles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Phew, that was quite the encounter. Given your theorie of time travel, it means that even if she warned Toga, he would still get slain. So i bet there's no going around it. That's very sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, Toga needs a good spanking ! Well done, lady mother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh he is precious ! There's so much room for change, I can't wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i never read kagome sesshomaru fiction this good. You're really talented. You can execute every moment and details perfect. Everything is so perfect. There is so much moment that i love so i can't write all of it. But in this chapter, the most emotional moment for me is when sesshomaru gave his baby canine to Totosai for Kagome's ringbbecause he used it to mark her, like.. what a genius you are Most of sesshomaru x kagome fiction always makes Inuyasha a bad person who betray Kagome. But reality is Inuyasha is just a boy who wants love from family and you tell his story so damn good. Oh my good i can't express how glad i am to be able to read this masterpiece. I don't know if you read it or not, but thank you for writing this beautiful story. God blessed you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can't stop crying |
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