Reviews for Unspoiled
original1 chapter 100 . 7/23
I know that this has been finished for many years. Just wanted to say what an amazing read it was. Tons of heart. Loved it from start to finish.
Minavi chapter 3 . 7/19
This is going to sound silly but I have ADHD and I really appreciate your short chapters. It's so much easier for me to focus and finish a story with 100 short chapters compared to one with 10 long chapters, even if the total word count is the same. Thanks for writing in such a way sometimes :)
black-lotusblossom chapter 100 . 7/8
I have probably reread this story about 20 times. It perfect how you weaved everything... it’s just such a balm for the soul, your story and writing and perspective. The full story and complete complete of honor, duty, and love. That even years and year later... how their Father’s pride and love survived. Their marriage acknowledged by all that matters... surviving even though at the time no one accepted it. But what matters, what is true, always survives and comes together in the crazy way life has things come together... with patience and enduring. Thank you thank you. This story is beautiful.
Daydreamer1515 chapter 25 . 7/7
I love this story so much! It’s beautifully written and your grasp on Kegome’s character is phenomenal. The way you explore young Sesshoumaru feels very natural and believable. You are a very talented writer! I look forward to continuing to read on
Guest chapter 21 . 7/1
guck yea soggigd
Lady Deviance chapter 100 . 6/26
Took 3 days to read between work but I finished lol. Lovely piece.
Daughter-of-the-Moon-7 chapter 28 . 6/24
I love this story so far! (No surprise considering how much I love other stories of yours that I’ve read.) Kagome being the influence that changes Inuyashas fathers opinion on humans is a great twist, and I love this version of Sesshomarus mother.
Cciolatte chapter 100 . 6/12
Thank you for writing this. It has easily been one of the most complete, wholesome stories I've ever seen. I cannot express how much joy this story has brought me, I love it with all my heart. Thank you, it has been a beautiful experience.
Kaokenfan chapter 100 . 6/7
I’ve always been a Kenshin-Kaoru fan fiction reader and started very little ago on Inuyasha and this is by far one of the best stories I’ve read so far. You’re really good at writing. While it’s hard to imagine a small sesshomaru, it is sweet and endearing. The whole story overall is. And when Inuyasha tells Kagome he was expecting the opportunity tu give his most precious person to his brother :’) I loved loved loved this.
Pokopi123 chapter 100 . 5/31
It’s so beautiful. Love the last chapter soooo much! Thank you such a great story! :D
Pokopi123 chapter 93 . 5/30
Omg! This chapter *heart heart heart
Pokopi123 chapter 80 . 5/30
Love this chapter!
Pokopi123 chapter 1 . 5/25
This is super exciting! Can’t wait to read more to find out what happens next!
Guest chapter 100 . 5/23
This was beautiful, thank you :3
Sjm960 chapter 90 . 5/11
HEHE i laugh at the end of this chapter..
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