|Reviews for Once Upon A Moonless Night|
| accident prone chapter 6 . 4/20/2010
dang! too bad. but this means you'll focus on some of your other fics and update them fast, right? (coughHEREWEGOAGAINcough)
| Aria Sonata chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
In case you wanted to know, the dwarven vow about lying is # 11 "Lying is the first step down the path of thievery." Interesting chapter - come out with the next one as soon as you can!
| accident prone chapter 4 . 11/2/2009
I WANT A SENEL COOKIE! 8D
I liked the chapter. This story is absolutely crazy. It's like, Lloyd's Lloyd! Except he's also Lloyd somewhere else! ONly different! And Kratos too! And...and...and they saw them in a game! Except now it's not a game! My head hurts now. I'll just go with it. Kratos is a jerk. And Remiel so does talk in a "iruleyou" sort of way. Gar, I really hate him.
OH NOES you papercutted Lloyd's hair! D: NOW WHAT?
Now you update. Mm-hmm. -nod, nod-
| Symphoniafan chapter 3 . 10/2/2009
The only thing that really was Kratos wanting to stick out his tongue... it just doesn't seem to fit him, or in general any grown man.
Other than that, the twist was really neat. Didn't see it coming.
Perhaps in the later chapters, make Lloyd a little more concerned. It could be realization hits him or something, cause he probably should panick or at least be worried about how to get back.
Now the question is, what will happen with Kratos? Is it the Kratos from the hospital, or Kratos from the game? I suppose we shall see.
Till next time.
| Symphoniafan chapter 2 . 10/2/2009
Sorry its late.
Hmm, well, the time skips were reasonable,I am not sure if you could do it any other way and you kept it going smoothly.
Inlcuding the others, Colette, Genis and Zelos, was a nice touch, too. Gave it a different image to see the three and made it more realistic to have Lloyd's friends visit him.
The appearence of Yggdrasil was a little unexpected, though of course left us with questions as to what he was referring to.
The only thing... at the last seen when Lloyd didn't wake up. Kratos should have been a little more panicked, in my opinion. He seemed too...causal.
Till next time.
| accident prone chapter 3 . 10/1/2009
oh my. this is an interesting turn of evens. yggy is one wicked evil cookie. m...yggdrasill cookie...-crunches- mithos: oh no you ate me! D:
um...right...i'm random...I need to stop reading these when I'm so tired...OH WELL maybe next time I'll read it in the afternoon rather than just before I go to sleep...
BUT YEAH! Seriously. this is weird to my head now...and wait, wouldn't Lloyd see himself in the game when he played it and get weirded out? Or...or something. OH NOES MAH BRAINZ IMPLODING! D: Oh well! You need to update this soon. OKAY? -stares sternly- Oh, yeah, and it's Sylvarant. If you really wanted to know XD
| accident prone chapter 2 . 9/29/2009
ZOMG YOU KILLED MITHOS. D: Of course, he'd probably be evil anyway...maybe he lived through his sheer disconess and is the blond evil dude. but...um...yeah! I'm super tired right now actually...but man, Lloyd's life sucks. He just never gets a break...unless it's his arm or leg or something. Heheheh, sorry, bad joke. But anyway, update soon, okay?
| Symphoniafan chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
It was definitely sobering.
I hate car accidents, and anything to do with car accidents. I am always paranoid that I will end up in a horrible car accident. But in my opinion to wrote it really well, as well as the hospital scenes.
Kratos appears to be in-character and his reactions are believable as well.
I will be interesting to see what follows. With Lloyd and that mysterious person.
Till next time.
| Treedok chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
This is so sad! :[ I don't usually read AUs, but the father and son relationship is easily a favorite.
I hope that Lloyd's okay - he's only so little, in the eyes of a parent. I've never listened to the song before, but I may have to check it out now. Since you chose to write a songfic, I can tell that you were aiming for a specific mood.
I guess that your readers are going to have to wait to find out whether or not you're trying to make everybody cry. Keep it up, kind author. :]