Reviews for Fearing Goodbye
rqgenevieve chapter 4 . 6/24/2013
hmmm. . . *waggles eyebrows*
rqgenevieve chapter 3 . 6/24/2013
Grrr. . . I hate bullies :\
rqgenevieve chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
that's for sure ;)
rqgenevieve chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
ayoshi-chan923 chapter 24 . 4/11/2013
casey10rok chapter 24 . 3/21/2013
I LOVED IT! Yay I'm the 500th reviewer! :D
HitsuHina chapter 24 . 1/6/2013
i knew it.i knew that Miyone is going to give her heart to Momo
Lord Herobrine chapter 24 . 9/20/2012
Itcould just be me, but I thought the progression of events was a tad rushed. You may have ran out of stuff, or I may be just picky. I noticed much detail go into the POV (point of view) of toshiro and momo, yet not as much consideration into the other characters. Continuous alteration between pov's has more depth and styl in the long run. It may be tedious, but it administers certain aspects into the story that would normally be overlooked. Also, there might be a slight discrepancy between the twin driving diseases in this story. Said discrepancies could have been easily resolved during a footnote or some other addition. Being with a heart condition my self, i slightly understand what and what not may seem reasona ble during the events.
I felt the myione could have have a bit more depth earlier or later on to reinforce some minute aspects of the play. In addition, if the aspect of suicide might have been elaboratd on as an option to momo in her darkets hours, much more inner turmoil could hve flushed out. Now it may have seen unreasonable to add that, considering how momo was potrayed in this set, but whenyou are that in chaos aboyt yourself, the paths thw mind can go down are limitless in their effects...and their horrors.
All in all, a very fine read indeed. If you do desire to continue this then the advice ( or my own opinion. u dont like it, u dont have to listen to it) would be to see if u couldnt not weave such a tapestry of drama and multiple povs that there would be no stone left untouched. Such is my personal opinion. (if u timeskip, its best to...
.oh nvm. im just overreaching now)

Thus is my thoughts on this story.

Lord Herobrine.
LadyDy chapter 11 . 6/13/2012

T.T You make me cry with this chapter! T.T

I dont understand much english because I speak spanish...


Awesome history!

OMG! Im stil crying T.T

T.T Bye!
Bobateee chapter 23 . 1/19/2012
Great story

Truly great

I cried, I seriously did
Bobateee chapter 24 . 1/19/2012
Great story

Truly great

I cried, I seriously d
x3Xanoumkix3 chapter 24 . 11/16/2011
This is one of the most beautiful fan-fictions I have ever read :) I cried through all of it :') Thank you for writting this amazing story and thank you for sharing it with us :D THANK YOU!
Kyoumi Tsukitsune chapter 24 . 11/6/2011
Damn.. I cried reading this -_-
McCormick Girl chapter 24 . 8/30/2011
Oh gosh.

Was so beautiful and sad at the same time.

I'm still crying, was so beautiful.

Miyone was a really good person.

Well done! was a beautiful story, thank you so much!

Bye ~
Spider's Thread chapter 24 . 7/14/2011
What Miyone did was really sweet. The story was kinda sad but I really enjoyed it.
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