|Reviews for Fearing Goodbye|
| Monica chapter 24 . 6/10
Wonderful story! 3 this is yet the best I've read so far! i'm so elated that this story influenced me in a great way that it invigorated me to live my life to the fullest , to be optimistic and to never give up. I must say the author of this story is worth praising for.. I am glad that i've read this. Thank you for making this.. You've successfully made a fanfic that made a reader happy... Great author i must say! :)
| Krystalized C chapter 24 . 6/5
Ahh... this story. Just reading the tittle reminds me of how hurt I was at the time because of poor Hinamori being rejected. Anyway, I got to say, since the manga portrays Toshiro as a person who really cares about Hinamori, it was hard to picture this situation happening. However, I can see why you make the plot like this: Toshiro not being able to handle the rejection and moving on, and after that, f*cking with the hearts of 2 girls. I kinda disike Toshiro in this story, since he was inmature, but hey! that's what boys are :) Overall, there are some parts that are difficult for me to understand, mainly from Toshiro's other girl, but I guess we can find great girls with huge hearts like her (btw she was my fav character of this story).
Thanks for the story, it was pretty enjoyable and of course added to favs
| yoloswagmaster chapter 4 . 6/24/2013
hmmm. . . *waggles eyebrows*
| yoloswagmaster chapter 3 . 6/24/2013
Grrr. . . I hate bullies :\
| yoloswagmaster chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
that's for sure ;)
| yoloswagmaster chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
| ayoshi-chan923 chapter 24 . 4/11/2013
| casey10rok chapter 24 . 3/21/2013
I LOVED IT! Yay I'm the 500th reviewer! :D
| HitsuHina chapter 24 . 1/6/2013
i knew it.i knew that Miyone is going to give her heart to Momo
| Lord Herobrine chapter 24 . 9/20/2012
Itcould just be me, but I thought the progression of events was a tad rushed. You may have ran out of stuff, or I may be just picky. I noticed much detail go into the POV (point of view) of toshiro and momo, yet not as much consideration into the other characters. Continuous alteration between pov's has more depth and styl in the long run. It may be tedious, but it administers certain aspects into the story that would normally be overlooked. Also, there might be a slight discrepancy between the twin driving diseases in this story. Said discrepancies could have been easily resolved during a footnote or some other addition. Being with a heart condition my self, i slightly understand what and what not may seem reasona ble during the events.
I felt the myione could have have a bit more depth earlier or later on to reinforce some minute aspects of the play. In addition, if the aspect of suicide might have been elaboratd on as an option to momo in her darkets hours, much more inner turmoil could hve flushed out. Now it may have seen unreasonable to add that, considering how momo was potrayed in this set, but whenyou are that in chaos aboyt yourself, the paths thw mind can go down are limitless in their effects...and their horrors.
All in all, a very fine read indeed. If you do desire to continue this then the advice ( or my own opinion. u dont like it, u dont have to listen to it) would be to see if u couldnt not weave such a tapestry of drama and multiple povs that there would be no stone left untouched. Such is my personal opinion. (if u timeskip, its best to...
.oh nvm. im just overreaching now)
Thus is my thoughts on this story.
| LadyDy chapter 11 . 6/13/2012
T.T You make me cry with this chapter! T.T
I dont understand much english because I speak spanish...
But, I LOVE YOUR FIC!
OMG! Im stil crying T.T
| Bobateee chapter 23 . 1/19/2012
I cried, I seriously did
| Bobateee chapter 24 . 1/19/2012
I cried, I seriously d
| x3Xanoumakix3 chapter 24 . 11/16/2011
This is one of the most beautiful fan-fictions I have ever read :) I cried through all of it :') Thank you for writting this amazing story and thank you for sharing it with us :D THANK YOU!
| Kyoumi Tsukitsune chapter 24 . 11/6/2011
Damn.. I cried reading this -_-