Reviews for The Waiting Room
Nitrin chapter 5 . 8/30/2016
I really enjoyed reading this one. All the different perspectives. Nice storytelling. Reminded me of the Rashomon Job.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/10/2014
very well done - each character's view and who they are was very clear and you got all of their voices down... chapter 5 . 5/1/2014
I truely enjoyed reading this. Thak you.
Sarachan chapter 2 . 1/23/2014
Wow Parker's chapter sure is angsty. That was so unbelievably sad especially after the part where Parker mentions Nate is the dad and he's not supposed to cry, the amount of angst skyrocketed after that. Well done.
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 2 . 8/21/2012
Oh Parker. *sniff*

This was, surprisingly, painful to read. You nailed Parker and her way of viewing the world. I can totally see her needing movement for the world to feel normal and freaking out when no one is. I smirked a little bit when Nate started sputtering with her and her "crazy" (nice bit adding he sputters with Sophie too ;) ). But it worked out nicely with him being the one to give her a hug. And awww. The poor thing.
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Wow! Really, wow! Great start. In fact, I'm a little disturbed how easily you jumped into Hardison's head with this. The team's reactions are spot on (both during the incident and after). I kind of loved the hug-mime message to Parker. It's so wierd seeing the kids taking care of everyone else but I am enjoying it. Hopefully Eliot will be okay...
Harm Marie chapter 5 . 9/1/2011
Really loved this.
LadyArin chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Eliot seems to end up in the hospital in a lot of fanfic ...

Not that i'm complaining about this one. I think you did a great job with each character, particularly Parker, and i also liked some of your author's notes.
meri47 chapter 5 . 9/28/2010
I think that you portrayed all of the characters very well, so kudos to you.

I really enjoyed reading this, so keep up the good work!
ZodiacSnake chapter 5 . 4/30/2010
ok this is probably my favorite Leverage story to date! its defiantly one of the best iv read & the one i most enjoyed. having the story told lil by lil as each characters thoughts came out was very cool & the fight scenes were well done & easy to understand which can be hard at times so good job loved the fic _
BookLover223 chapter 5 . 4/25/2010
I loved how you brought Parkers staring rant into this last chapter
BookLover223 chapter 4 . 4/25/2010
Sophie was flawless like all the other chaaracters and I loved the last line.

Three criminals and an honest man (though the lines had been blurred significantly by this point) waited for their family to be complete again.
BookLover223 chapter 3 . 4/25/2010
It's so soad. I'm crying right now and the one line: It would be far too much like last time to be hugging another blonde woman right now, and if this time was going to be different it had to be completely different. was what really set me off
BookLover223 chapter 2 . 4/25/2010
It's so perfectly Parker.
BookLover223 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
You have the character perfectly. I can see Sophie staring at the walls in shock, Parker being jumpy and Nate wanting to run away quickly.
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